for Altered Perception2/23/2011 c1 
38TillysTealeaves
:-/ Poor Tom...
I really liked this. I truly believe that there was good in him and if people had nurtured that goodness, he would have turned out alright.
Good story!
38TillysTealeaves:-/ Poor Tom...
I really liked this. I truly believe that there was good in him and if people had nurtured that goodness, he would have turned out alright.
Good story!
7/27/2008 c1 15AllIWannaDo
Wow. I'm speechless. I didn't just like this, I loved it! I might even add it to my favorites. Funny, I've never read a Tom Riddle/OC fanfic before, but you made me like the pairing. Intense, and quite compelling, even from the very beginning. The intro really drew me in, specifically this bit: "His power-hungry eyes that made me shiver, his once handsome and beautiful face was contorted into such a bestial status it was no longer recognizable. When had this happened? When had he become this horrible, blood-thirsty monster?" I really understood what Danielle was feeling here. All of her emotions were perfectly described, and perfectly placed within the story. I almost cried when he killed her, and her last thought was that maybe she could've saved him...Loved the inner conflict between Voldemort/Tom Riddle (props for making the distinction between them clear!), Danielle's unanswered questions, the pain. This was deep, and left me wondering if Tom Riddle ever did love, if only for a fleeting moment. You handled a complex concept very well! Keep up the good work! :)
15AllIWannaDoWow. I'm speechless. I didn't just like this, I loved it! I might even add it to my favorites. Funny, I've never read a Tom Riddle/OC fanfic before, but you made me like the pairing. Intense, and quite compelling, even from the very beginning. The intro really drew me in, specifically this bit: "His power-hungry eyes that made me shiver, his once handsome and beautiful face was contorted into such a bestial status it was no longer recognizable. When had this happened? When had he become this horrible, blood-thirsty monster?" I really understood what Danielle was feeling here. All of her emotions were perfectly described, and perfectly placed within the story. I almost cried when he killed her, and her last thought was that maybe she could've saved him...Loved the inner conflict between Voldemort/Tom Riddle (props for making the distinction between them clear!), Danielle's unanswered questions, the pain. This was deep, and left me wondering if Tom Riddle ever did love, if only for a fleeting moment. You handled a complex concept very well! Keep up the good work! :)
7/24/2008 c1 3LadyNyan
I liked this introduction, it was very emotive and well-manered; all the feelings placed in their rightful spot, in the perfect moment...
I wish you'll update soon! :D
Best Regards,
Rita
PS - Tom Riddle/OC's rock ^^
3LadyNyanI liked this introduction, it was very emotive and well-manered; all the feelings placed in their rightful spot, in the perfect moment...
I wish you'll update soon! :D
Best Regards,
Rita
PS - Tom Riddle/OC's rock ^^
6/19/2008 c1 6boney
I thought it was very well written. ^ ^
You portrayed the emotions really well, I could understand exactly how she felt. ^ ^
Awesome oneshot,
the quoi
6boneyI thought it was very well written. ^ ^
You portrayed the emotions really well, I could understand exactly how she felt. ^ ^
Awesome oneshot,
the quoi
6/16/2008 c1 Nakashima-michiyo
Okay, not signed in but, meh too lazy XD, but oh gosh D:, it's so beautiful. This one-shot really struck a chord in me. I really liked it ^^. Keep it a one-shot, as much as a i want a prequel. It's bittersweet, and leaves me hanging on hoping that Tom may feel at least /something/. =D Awesome job.
Okay, not signed in but, meh too lazy XD, but oh gosh D:, it's so beautiful. This one-shot really struck a chord in me. I really liked it ^^. Keep it a one-shot, as much as a i want a prequel. It's bittersweet, and leaves me hanging on hoping that Tom may feel at least /something/. =D Awesome job.