
7/6/2008 c5
5gangstapenguinduck lover
Mh...
I like the story line, but you should get someone to be your beta-reader.

Mh...
I like the story line, but you should get someone to be your beta-reader.
6/23/2008 c2
4Light at the End of the Tunnel
the POV of this chapter didn't match the first line of your summary ( "Your name is Arianna Romano and this is you story") or how you wrote the first one.

the POV of this chapter didn't match the first line of your summary ( "Your name is Arianna Romano and this is you story") or how you wrote the first one.
6/22/2008 c2
5gangstapenguinduck lover
WOW.
WOW.
WOW!
Please, please, please, update!
I'm biting my fingernails off here!

WOW.
WOW.
WOW!
Please, please, please, update!
I'm biting my fingernails off here!