
6/4/2009 c5 Person
*pukes* what is it with girls and NaruSasu. i mean we ALL know that Sasuke is GAY but naruto is STRAIGHT!
*pukes* what is it with girls and NaruSasu. i mean we ALL know that Sasuke is GAY but naruto is STRAIGHT!
5/20/2009 c2
3Anosrepasi
So far... really good! I know you've discontinued the story but it looked like it had a great idea and the beginning was promising, the only thing that I'd advise for future stories would be to slow the pace down, going from being aquantinces(sp?) to having a first kiss in one chapter is kinda a leap.
Keep up the awesomeness!
~SnowsShadows

So far... really good! I know you've discontinued the story but it looked like it had a great idea and the beginning was promising, the only thing that I'd advise for future stories would be to slow the pace down, going from being aquantinces(sp?) to having a first kiss in one chapter is kinda a leap.
Keep up the awesomeness!
~SnowsShadows
2/6/2009 c1 Greenberet
Are you still going to CONTINUE on? I already have waited OUT on your "Bad news." And no new chapters of this pair have come up over the months!
(Not just you but other AUTHORS)
Keep on going.
And 1 more thing...I DON'T LOOK OR READ YAOI, GIRL!
Are you still going to CONTINUE on? I already have waited OUT on your "Bad news." And no new chapters of this pair have come up over the months!
(Not just you but other AUTHORS)
Keep on going.
And 1 more thing...I DON'T LOOK OR READ YAOI, GIRL!
11/3/2008 c4
1inuyouko
good luck with the novel hopes it works out well for you and cant wait for the next chapter in december

good luck with the novel hopes it works out well for you and cant wait for the next chapter in december
7/23/2008 c2
9This Faithless Romance
Aw! That was adorable! And, unlike most fanfictions, it has barely any OOCness.
PLEASE CONTINUE!

Aw! That was adorable! And, unlike most fanfictions, it has barely any OOCness.
PLEASE CONTINUE!
7/1/2008 c2
1Meow-Wow
Aww, it was cute, and you have a strong writng style,and good use of grammar...I don't really have any suggestions...patiently waiting for more!

Aww, it was cute, and you have a strong writng style,and good use of grammar...I don't really have any suggestions...patiently waiting for more!