
6/13/2019 c1 Amy
Aww, cute story.
Aww, cute story.
8/12/2011 c1
27thecanadian13
Sweet. I like how you were using all of the examples in the first few sentences and then you pull out a scene. nice style.

Sweet. I like how you were using all of the examples in the first few sentences and then you pull out a scene. nice style.
1/20/2009 c1
9brick999
I really enjoyed this. Amazing, and I don't know how I missed over this. Perfect, especially the last line.

I really enjoyed this. Amazing, and I don't know how I missed over this. Perfect, especially the last line.
12/24/2008 c1
1xXMissInvisibleXx
I love the ending when derek whispers 'hello trouble' that was so cute! great story!

I love the ending when derek whispers 'hello trouble' that was so cute! great story!