for A Cup of Bliss or Poison?10/8/2008 c1 Balloons go POP
Liked it? Loved it? WHen reading a story that's already been posted for a while i don't usually review until i catch up but i had to review this chpater. Jayne Eyre is my favourite book and you've captures the spirit of their love perfectly. i have to go and read the rest now.
keep up the good work :)
Liked it? Loved it? WHen reading a story that's already been posted for a while i don't usually review until i catch up but i had to review this chpater. Jayne Eyre is my favourite book and you've captures the spirit of their love perfectly. i have to go and read the rest now.
keep up the good work :)
9/21/2008 c9 Autumn
Wonderful job! Keep up the superb work!
Wonderful job! Keep up the superb work!
9/12/2008 c9 karmencorn
Thanks for these additional chapters! I am so glad you are keeping this story going!
I must admit I was a little disappointed in Chapter 8. You're right; it would be hard to beat Bronte's original proposal scene. But if everyone thought that about her book, we'd never have any fan fiction, eh?
I would rather have seen what your interpretation adds to it. Maybe something from Rochester's POV. Or references to the other twists you've given this story.
Anyway, I was glad to see that you were back to your originality in Chapter 9.
Don't leave us hanging for too long!
Thanks for these additional chapters! I am so glad you are keeping this story going!
I must admit I was a little disappointed in Chapter 8. You're right; it would be hard to beat Bronte's original proposal scene. But if everyone thought that about her book, we'd never have any fan fiction, eh?
I would rather have seen what your interpretation adds to it. Maybe something from Rochester's POV. Or references to the other twists you've given this story.
Anyway, I was glad to see that you were back to your originality in Chapter 9.
Don't leave us hanging for too long!
9/2/2008 c5 
134give4get
super well written, good job!
you tell this all through mr. rochester POV really well! Quite an interesting twist to JE too. Ah, I wonder what's going to happen? How will Jane find out that Bertha is really his wife? Update as soon as you can, please!
-serena
134give4getsuper well written, good job!
you tell this all through mr. rochester POV really well! Quite an interesting twist to JE too. Ah, I wonder what's going to happen? How will Jane find out that Bertha is really his wife? Update as soon as you can, please!
-serena
8/9/2008 c1 Lady In The Clouds
I like very much this story! i cant spect to know what was going to pass whit Jane and Mr Rochester!(sorry if i do not write well, im spanish and i dont know english very much!:)
I like very much this story! i cant spect to know what was going to pass whit Jane and Mr Rochester!(sorry if i do not write well, im spanish and i dont know english very much!:)
8/8/2008 c4 Artistgirl
What an awesome story i cant wait for the next chapter !
You write really well and the story flows nicely, you have stayed very accurate with the characters and the setting =D
What an awesome story i cant wait for the next chapter !
You write really well and the story flows nicely, you have stayed very accurate with the characters and the setting =D
8/7/2008 c4 4tobystephensfan
I am absolutely loving your story! I have seen it being updated many times but never thought to read it because i was already reading something else and i can't read 2 stories at the same time. I only just noticed this about a half hour ago and i am blown away. I think the storyline is excellent. I really really hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. But i beg you please don't keep us waiting too long!
4tobystephensfanI am absolutely loving your story! I have seen it being updated many times but never thought to read it because i was already reading something else and i can't read 2 stories at the same time. I only just noticed this about a half hour ago and i am blown away. I think the storyline is excellent. I really really hope you update soon! I can't wait to see what happens next. But i beg you please don't keep us waiting too long!
7/29/2008 c4 Debocherry
Ah! why don't you get more reviews! this is a very well written story and you've captured Rochester's tortured soul perfectly.
please update soon.
Ah! why don't you get more reviews! this is a very well written story and you've captured Rochester's tortured soul perfectly.
please update soon.
7/25/2008 c3 ChapeauVert
I *love* the title, so much. And the entire story is really well written. I love it :)
I *love* the title, so much. And the entire story is really well written. I love it :)
7/8/2008 c2 25Captain Weirdo
This is wonderful. You are a talented writer, to be sure! I found you from the review you left on one of my stories. I'm not a great fan of Jane Eyre, but you make me want to read more!
Thanks!
cw
25Captain WeirdoThis is wonderful. You are a talented writer, to be sure! I found you from the review you left on one of my stories. I'm not a great fan of Jane Eyre, but you make me want to read more!
Thanks!
cw
6/26/2008 c2 2bookworm33
Oh man! Why's he being cold? Is it because Jane freaked out? Gah, please update. Good chap by the way.
2bookworm33Oh man! Why's he being cold? Is it because Jane freaked out? Gah, please update. Good chap by the way.