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3/6/2011 c11 3DarkFlameInfernal
i love this part!

Marks stomach suddenly growled.

Everyone around them stopped and looked at him and gave him a weird stare and sweat dropped.

" Dude seriously we're in the middle of a battle here," A random person from the AAO said.

" Well… sorry… but I didn't eat lunch yet… you people attacked 2 HOURS earlier… we were suppose to HAVE LUNCH FIRST!" he shouted…

" We made a time?"Natsume asked.

" Yea.. they were suppose to attack around 1 so we were meant to have an hour for lunch…" he complained, " PLUS… we all FORGOT it was today… so I kinda overslept and didn't really eat breakfast either…."

" Idiot…" everyone around them said.

" here…" a AAO person said giving him a breakfast bar…

" Thanks..." he said gobbling it all up/

" Ok then….! LET'S go…!" attacking once again…
6/10/2010 c10 Chennah
I kinda feel like ur trying to make Yuri and Main in the story (which i don't like a lot but i kinda like it) It's a bit weird, why didn't the kinomi and kenji or wtv crap become jealous at Mark and Yuri when they were partnered with Hotaru and Natsume? Please reply if you can.

Chennah~
1/28/2010 c12 The Random Passerby
WHAT A GREAT STORY!
10/31/2009 c12 moonacre99
LOVE YOUR STORY A LOT

PLEASE MAKE A SEQUEL!

YOU CAN'T END IT HERE... PLEASE I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY

PLEASE UPDATE SOON...

I WANT TO READ YOUR STORY
10/16/2009 c12 16Mishaa
buhuhuhu! i really dont get it. y did mark hav 2 leave? i thot he loved Mikan! What the Hell? i didnt get the last few chaps... wats w/ Yuri? wat 'bout Ruka? wat happened 2 them? y was Mark taken w/ yuri?

the AAO is stupid. they signed up for a death wish. they knew they wud die n yet they still wanted 2 fite w/ Youichi, Yuri, Mark and Mikan!

wats d title of d sequel. mayb i cud get it properly f i read the sequel.

BTW: i put this story in my Favorites. Ja Ne!
6/12/2009 c12 Caitlin
Keep Up The Good Work

I love your stories...but I didn't understand the ending!

And I was hoping that the ending was happy!like Mikan with Natsume and ruka with Hotaru again!
4/16/2009 c12 2nessie018
hey!...uhmm...

i want to know if this is a natsumexmikan,hotaruxruka fanfic?...

i do hope so...

i want to know if they would be together again... i mean natsime and mikan and hotaru and ruka..also will they be bestfriends again?ruka and natsume? and mikan and hotaru?...and also what happened to kinomi the bitch whore and to kenji as well...please do the sequel...please10x...thanks!
4/14/2009 c12 1TheBlackRabbit
awsome as ever and i still has not deafeated him yet T.T
4/14/2009 c12 2FireRosePetal
so was natsume faking the sad? plus i wonder who were the two ppl that took them and like how many chapter is this?
3/23/2009 c1 2Maixin
heya estelle! i will read urs wen i can be bothered to read 60k works XD
3/21/2009 c11 mysillyfolsom
huh?

it's very confusing!

the last part, i really didn't get it
3/13/2009 c11 5Suzuka Harukaze
omg what happened? please update~
3/11/2009 c11 1TheBlackRabbit
i think someone play final fantasy her ;D lol gawd i hate battlng Anima im at that part in FFX Dx i die when seymour come out again DX lol anyways awsome stry
3/10/2009 c11 2FireRosePetal
no plz continue!
3/10/2009 c11 elfspirit7
Nice chapter but no cliffhanger! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
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