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11/22/2008 c9 7TheBadsun

idk wat to say

im confused

shouldnt mark b jealous of hyuuga?

n yuri of hotaru?

i mean im srsly dont noe wats going on

can u plz explain it to me?
11/17/2008 c9 littleazngirl24
wow~nice...update soon!
11/17/2008 c9 IdeasforPenName
hope you do the next chapt fast can't wait, hm...wonder what they'll do *smirks*
11/17/2008 c9 mysillyfolsom
so you basically say that yuri and mark wanted mikan and natsume, ruka and hotaru to be back together?

i don't like it, it's like they were toying Ruka ang Mikan's feelings...and i want new pairing...
11/16/2008 c9 1TheBlackRabbit
aw i wantd mark to be wih mikan
11/16/2008 c4 TheBlackRabbit
how shiva came otu was like ff7 or 8 i forgot anwyas nice
11/16/2008 c9 5bloodyrosey
update soon please.

11/16/2008 c9 elfspirit7
Interesting chapter! Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chapter XD!
11/16/2008 c9 9Olympiangirl
This rocks! Update soon!
11/8/2008 c8 5bloodyrosey
lol update soon please

11/2/2008 c8 littleazngirl24
AWW!i hope mikan ends up with natume and not mark...ONEGAI
11/1/2008 c8 mysillyfolsom
i just realized this, you haven't fully introduced the character of hotaru, i mean in your story; when mikan and ruka came back, she went to hug them...

i'm really confused in that because, if you hotaru in this story is like the hotaru in the manga, then he won't just go and hug mikan, it's mikan who hugs her...
10/13/2008 c8 17kawaiineko139

long one..enihow, i really enjoy it!


best story ever..=)

please update so0n(as you can though)..cant wait for next chaps..=)

10/12/2008 c8 elfspirit7
Yay an update, and cool chapter :) Please update as soon as you can, can't wait to read the next chpater XD!
10/12/2008 c8 1Little-Miss-Shy-Girl
update soon:)
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