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8/5/2008 c5 23xXBlackTenshiXx
please update soon! will there be a chapter where mark and mikan/yuri and ruka see each other again like maybe in gakuen alice in japan? anyways u decide its ur story again please update soon!
8/4/2008 c5 EFFYOU
omg this is too interesting!

update soon!
7/31/2008 c5 1Little-Miss-Shy-Girl
love it hahahahahahahahaha

hotaru and natsume deserve that

wish the next chapter is the arrival of mark and Yuri
7/28/2008 c5 4crimsonMoonlight20
please update soon!
7/28/2008 c5 IdeasforPenName
can't wait for the next chapter, please hurry and update
7/27/2008 c5 7TheBadsun
Wahh its to short me want more lol j/k or am i?

lol anyways please update soom and keep it up i wonder what happens...
7/27/2008 c5 6WinterMidnightMoon
awesome story! it's different from the rest. please update soon! pretty please! :D
7/27/2008 c5 2KMarielle09
NICE!
7/25/2008 c4 1Little-Miss-Shy-Girl
love it ruka and yuri

mark and mikan

make natsume and hotaru super jealous

i am waiting for mikan and ruka to return

and why are there any news that came from

japan/gakuen alice?
7/17/2008 c4 4crimsonMoonlight20
hmm... i like it! some parts cunfused me a bit...

and its not like i dont like Yuri or anything... but i think there's alot of Yuri(the girl in ur story)...

also good job!
7/17/2008 c1 Duran-Kuga
oMG! You played/watched ffx? I love that game!
7/17/2008 c4 EFFYOU
aw3wsom3! chapter

longest chapter i ever read!
7/17/2008 c4 Yukairi
Oh no! Pls try not to end up with rukaxoc or mikanxoc and are they going to go back to japan gakuen alice soon?^^
7/17/2008 c4 2KMarielle09
wehe! glad u did it...

hope u can do also the 10 words...

24 pages and 9700 words?

wow...

ur just too industrious...

bye the way, nice story!
7/17/2008 c4 9animeg098
u dont mention anything about natsume and hotaru and ur extending it alot the stay!

maybe after the next chapter they should go to gakuen alice!

its not critisism but if u extend to much it makes the story confusing and a bit boring!

and plz make natsume and mikan a pair!
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