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7/10/2017 c1 Guest
Hmmm.. I like this *squeals* what was the silver strip?
5/28/2016 c1 Guest
I want more of this story!
11/15/2014 c1 Guest
Awwww! I guess you won't update this story. It's been years. It was a good story .
8/15/2014 c1 kelley turner
White more pleas and thank u so mush
2/10/2014 c1 Guest
thanks but this is not finished and I don't have twitter have twitter
1/16/2014 c1 12CinderWitt
Whoa, whoa. I just read six chapters. You're killing me here. Although, seeing as it's been two years since you've updated, I don't believe you will be updating anytime soon... Hmph. You should think about it.

-Taylor Tonks
5/29/2013 c1 Guest
Please continue I want to know what mike gave Edward and if Bella ever finds out who he is
11/12/2012 c1 Guest
i loved it! i keep comming back hoping for more! u need to hurry im dieing over here!
11/6/2012 c1 10BellazB
Love this story! Please update soon! Want to see how the story progresses.
10/9/2012 c1 1Lissagirl26
I can't wait for more Pretty please!
8/30/2012 c1 4foreveryoursxx
continue pls im dying
8/25/2012 c1 11Damon4eva
OMG such an amazinggggg storyyyy :D i loveeee your writting style :D please update asap :D xoxo 3
8/21/2012 c1 hotedward07
Hello , i was windering if u have the conete copy of this story because i was looking for it but theres nithing outhere! Pls pls pls! I really like to finish reading your story! Thanks much and God bless!
8/7/2011 c6 K. Jaymes
This is a very interesting and intriguing version of Twilight. Keep writing!
8/7/2011 c6 Guest
you miss me off! you have yet to do another review. :(
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