for One Heart Too Many4/13/2015 c1 Applesarerotten
Chapter one is over and I can't help but to think, 'Why the hell is there only 31(including mine) reviews'?! This is really good. To be honest at first I was like this is going to to full of terrible grammar and a rushed plot, but after reading chapter one I'm totally hooked! Never judge a story by it's reviews I guess:-)
Chapter one is over and I can't help but to think, 'Why the hell is there only 31(including mine) reviews'?! This is really good. To be honest at first I was like this is going to to full of terrible grammar and a rushed plot, but after reading chapter one I'm totally hooked! Never judge a story by it's reviews I guess:-)
2/23/2011 c1 
2missmetric
I absolutely loved this story the first time I read it. So happy to have found it again. :)
2missmetricI absolutely loved this story the first time I read it. So happy to have found it again. :)
3/20/2009 c1 metawolfagus
This story has far too few reviews for my taste so here's #29. :D
Still a fan...
I have read this at least twice and love it.
Excellent work.
This story has far too few reviews for my taste so here's #29. :D
Still a fan...
I have read this at least twice and love it.
Excellent work.
12/12/2008 c1 5Miss Wolfsbane
Wot! Chelle, I read this story on LJ, but because of the homophobia and the disabling of the anonymous posting, I couldn't say anything. It nearly drove me crazy!
I'm actually listening to the OHTM playlist right now. And yes, I actually have it as its own playlist. Possession will never be the same.
Totally awesome story! I think your portrayal of Jasper is amazing and not offensive. That's a difficult. (Jasper is now my favorite character ever. The Trinity is indestructible. And it figures that Somewhere over just came on when I started writing about him.)
The Starbucks kiss has stayed with me from the start. I keep hoping that they'll meet up again and leave the SGH rumor mill wondering if the entire gay community knows each other somehow. Heehee.
I can't wait for a sequel from Erica's point of view. That story was the best Callica story ever (totally kicks Shondaland's ass. ;P)
The most obsessed straight Callica fan,
~~Wolfie
5Miss WolfsbaneWot! Chelle, I read this story on LJ, but because of the homophobia and the disabling of the anonymous posting, I couldn't say anything. It nearly drove me crazy!
I'm actually listening to the OHTM playlist right now. And yes, I actually have it as its own playlist. Possession will never be the same.
Totally awesome story! I think your portrayal of Jasper is amazing and not offensive. That's a difficult. (Jasper is now my favorite character ever. The Trinity is indestructible. And it figures that Somewhere over just came on when I started writing about him.)
The Starbucks kiss has stayed with me from the start. I keep hoping that they'll meet up again and leave the SGH rumor mill wondering if the entire gay community knows each other somehow. Heehee.
I can't wait for a sequel from Erica's point of view. That story was the best Callica story ever (totally kicks Shondaland's ass. ;P)
The most obsessed straight Callica fan,
~~Wolfie
12/6/2008 c40 2xf housefan
Thank you so much for this! I'm sad that it's over, but you ended it really well :) Thank you for allowing me to live in my own denial about Erica leaving, at least for a little while. I hope you decide to start up another one? But if not... I expect this one to be in my favorites for a while longer :)
2xf housefanThank you so much for this! I'm sad that it's over, but you ended it really well :) Thank you for allowing me to live in my own denial about Erica leaving, at least for a little while. I hope you decide to start up another one? But if not... I expect this one to be in my favorites for a while longer :)
12/5/2008 c40 metawolfagus
You, my dear author, are a new favorite. I love this. It got me through the awfulness that is Grey's at the moment and warmed my blackened, bitter, people-hating heart :D.
You struck a wonderful balance between drama, sweetness, humor and, of course, hot girl sex.
And you don't suck at writing, which is more than most fanfiction writers can say.
Suffice to say, you are made of epic win.
And thank you.
I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you in the near future.
Perhaps something from the lovely Dr. Hahn's point of view? You write Callie really well, but I'd be intereted to see what you do with Erica.
You, my dear author, are a new favorite. I love this. It got me through the awfulness that is Grey's at the moment and warmed my blackened, bitter, people-hating heart :D.
You struck a wonderful balance between drama, sweetness, humor and, of course, hot girl sex.
And you don't suck at writing, which is more than most fanfiction writers can say.
Suffice to say, you are made of epic win.
And thank you.
I'll be looking forward to seeing more from you in the near future.
Perhaps something from the lovely Dr. Hahn's point of view? You write Callie really well, but I'd be intereted to see what you do with Erica.
12/2/2008 c40 lacoma
I already read the end at your livejournal, but I have no account there so I review here. I'm so sad that this story is over...for now...because it was a wonderful journey and it made me forget about the real bad world outside. I can't wait for the Erica pov because I know it's going to be outstanding and amazing and wonderful...you get the idea, don't ya? I would love to see some flashbacks in the sequel, maybe of the moment when Erica had to operate on Callie, you know, so that we can see what she's been going through.
Nevertheless as much as I can't wait for the sequel and Ericas pov, I hope you're still going to write from Callie's pov someday, because nobody can write Callie as good as you and it would be a shame to lose that.
thank you very much for sharing this amazing story with us
lacoma
I already read the end at your livejournal, but I have no account there so I review here. I'm so sad that this story is over...for now...because it was a wonderful journey and it made me forget about the real bad world outside. I can't wait for the Erica pov because I know it's going to be outstanding and amazing and wonderful...you get the idea, don't ya? I would love to see some flashbacks in the sequel, maybe of the moment when Erica had to operate on Callie, you know, so that we can see what she's been going through.
Nevertheless as much as I can't wait for the sequel and Ericas pov, I hope you're still going to write from Callie's pov someday, because nobody can write Callie as good as you and it would be a shame to lose that.
thank you very much for sharing this amazing story with us
lacoma
12/1/2008 c40 2Jay00789
I told you I loved this story! Just read it again! Can't wait for the sequel!
2Jay00789I told you I loved this story! Just read it again! Can't wait for the sequel!
11/30/2008 c40 edith418
Thank you once again for sharing your talent with us. I have loved your story and I am sad to see it come to an end. If you ever feel the need/desire to write another Callica story I can promise I will read it.
Thank you once again for sharing your talent with us. I have loved your story and I am sad to see it come to an end. If you ever feel the need/desire to write another Callica story I can promise I will read it.
11/26/2008 c39 MsLaceyLoo
I hope you continue this story soon. I have spent the last several days reading it. It is so beautifully written. You truly know how to tug on someone's heart. I have laughed, cried, and wanted to harm a few of the characters (Helen) but I couldn't stop reading it. It's absolutely beautiful. Being a person with a disability and a person who has worked with people who have various disabilities from physical (like mine) to developmental and so on, I commend you for your sub-storyline of Jasper and his disability. Callie's opinions of group homes and rehabilitation centers is not uncommon and it seems like Rachel's Clinic would be the ideal place for people with developmental disabilities to stay. One word of advice though - I would avoid the use of the word patients when refering to the inhabitants of Rachel's Clinic. Residents or Clients would be more appropriate. The word patient conjures up a feeling of illness or hospitalization which the inhabitants clearly are not ill, they just need help with their daily living activities.
I hope you continue this story soon. I have spent the last several days reading it. It is so beautifully written. You truly know how to tug on someone's heart. I have laughed, cried, and wanted to harm a few of the characters (Helen) but I couldn't stop reading it. It's absolutely beautiful. Being a person with a disability and a person who has worked with people who have various disabilities from physical (like mine) to developmental and so on, I commend you for your sub-storyline of Jasper and his disability. Callie's opinions of group homes and rehabilitation centers is not uncommon and it seems like Rachel's Clinic would be the ideal place for people with developmental disabilities to stay. One word of advice though - I would avoid the use of the word patients when refering to the inhabitants of Rachel's Clinic. Residents or Clients would be more appropriate. The word patient conjures up a feeling of illness or hospitalization which the inhabitants clearly are not ill, they just need help with their daily living activities.
11/26/2008 c35 2Funnysfun
I can only say, that this story is truly awesome! You are describing the characters very well and how you worked their background in it. I like the idea of bringing Addison back and Callie's family! Jazz is truely amazing! I also love the mix of humor and drama you lead us through, it's great!
You have gotten me seriously hooked on your story and I'm exited to see that you have updated! I can't wait to reed it!
Keep up the great writing!
2FunnysfunI can only say, that this story is truly awesome! You are describing the characters very well and how you worked their background in it. I like the idea of bringing Addison back and Callie's family! Jazz is truely amazing! I also love the mix of humor and drama you lead us through, it's great!
You have gotten me seriously hooked on your story and I'm exited to see that you have updated! I can't wait to reed it!
Keep up the great writing!
11/25/2008 c35 edith418
Okay, I know that I said I was going to stop with the massive overload of reviewing but you had me hit almost every emotion...tears as Erica deals with her father, then out and out laughter that made tears come to my eyes when Callie tells her parents how she got the busted lip and then her mom starts to tell her how to go "parking"...and then the romantic dinner followed by Jasper coming back...whew...it was outstanding work as usual...And again, I'm so glad you posted another chapter yesterday...I hope it is the sign of even more to come!
Okay, I know that I said I was going to stop with the massive overload of reviewing but you had me hit almost every emotion...tears as Erica deals with her father, then out and out laughter that made tears come to my eyes when Callie tells her parents how she got the busted lip and then her mom starts to tell her how to go "parking"...and then the romantic dinner followed by Jasper coming back...whew...it was outstanding work as usual...And again, I'm so glad you posted another chapter yesterday...I hope it is the sign of even more to come!
11/24/2008 c30 edith418
One last comment before heading off to bed...yes I pathetic and I am aware of this, but you did it too me again in this chapter...you had me all warm and fuzzy and happy and then you have me crying...somehow this story got into my heart and it tugs on all of my emotions and you've got me swinging from everyone...I should hate you and stop reading, but I simply can't...plus, when I saw that you added another chapter today I went balistic!
I hope more keep coming and coming and my it really doesn't stop...I'm not so sure anyone else in my life agrees with that statement, but they'll get over it!
One last comment before heading off to bed...yes I pathetic and I am aware of this, but you did it too me again in this chapter...you had me all warm and fuzzy and happy and then you have me crying...somehow this story got into my heart and it tugs on all of my emotions and you've got me swinging from everyone...I should hate you and stop reading, but I simply can't...plus, when I saw that you added another chapter today I went balistic!
I hope more keep coming and coming and my it really doesn't stop...I'm not so sure anyone else in my life agrees with that statement, but they'll get over it!
11/24/2008 c26 edith418
Seriously, I am not a read and review every chapter, but you made me cry again and I had to tell you that...having Erica go back and face her past and then leave it behind her...man...you really know how to tug at the heart strings...plus the fact that you pick the state just above the state that I ran away from for very similar to the same reasons that you have Erica run from certainly doesn't help...whew...seriously, you are amazing and I hope you know that!
Seriously, I am not a read and review every chapter, but you made me cry again and I had to tell you that...having Erica go back and face her past and then leave it behind her...man...you really know how to tug at the heart strings...plus the fact that you pick the state just above the state that I ran away from for very similar to the same reasons that you have Erica run from certainly doesn't help...whew...seriously, you are amazing and I hope you know that!
11/24/2008 c25 edith418
I know that I have already left so many reviews for you that you are probably tired of them...but seriously, I am so in love with your story and am consuming it with every free time I have...I love my job and today was the first time that I actually wished I was at home so that I could be reading more (our work internet blocker keeps everything out so I couldn't even sneak in a chapter during my lunch break.)
A few chapters back you actually made me cry...CRY...oh man...you are good!
Sincerly, thank you. And I genuinely mean that...your work here and plot is amazing and I as much as I want to read it all, I am secretly hoping it never ends.
I know that I have already left so many reviews for you that you are probably tired of them...but seriously, I am so in love with your story and am consuming it with every free time I have...I love my job and today was the first time that I actually wished I was at home so that I could be reading more (our work internet blocker keeps everything out so I couldn't even sneak in a chapter during my lunch break.)
A few chapters back you actually made me cry...CRY...oh man...you are good!
Sincerly, thank you. And I genuinely mean that...your work here and plot is amazing and I as much as I want to read it all, I am secretly hoping it never ends.