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10/17/2010 c1 4Sonny13
Yeah, it's pretty good. Your an amazing writer. Sad that April died. poor Griffin.:I
4/25/2010 c1 10BrIdGeT-tsuchi
Tat was really gud!

really
1/15/2009 c1 3TheLovingCake
Loved it! Very touching :')
12/10/2008 c1 15FlyingHampsterOfDoom
You used such a great song for this fic (it's one of my favs.) and you wove it into the story beautifully- none of that 'I'm going to have the exact same thing in the song happen in my story!' And believe me, it is most definitely appreciated. And the story was really well written, as well. Just, all around good job.
10/9/2008 c1 6Michellesdaughter
Love it! Perfect fit. :D
8/15/2008 c1 31Schyzotypal X
Long Depressed Slightly Wistful Sigh...

Why do all you female Griffin love interest character's die at the end? Sad but well written, nice going.
6/26/2008 c1 2werewolfness
Oh my word... that is the saddest, most sadistic depressing thing I have ever read. I loved it! lol. You had a little switch from third person to first person, and it confused me, but I loved the death scene and how he couldn't help her. As a matter of fact, I love tragedies. Tragedies rule.

And the last line was very haunting. It makes me hate Millie a little less. :D
6/25/2008 c1 3M J Rosemary
Brillient. You captured Griffin's emotions brilliently. I loved that little bit at the end, with Millie looking like April. I hope you write more jumper fic, there isn't enough out there.

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