7/3/2012 c3 5FORD B
Very awesome story! I'm really impressed with it and really like OC stories best. Will be getting back to reading more when I have time again. Keep up the great work!
Very awesome story! I'm really impressed with it and really like OC stories best. Will be getting back to reading more when I have time again. Keep up the great work!
6/11/2010 c8 4spiderninja16
very nicely done. keeping the original feel of the episode while adding in a new character that flows nicely with the the original cast.
very nicely done. keeping the original feel of the episode while adding in a new character that flows nicely with the the original cast.
6/8/2010 c8 143ALIMOO1971
Great chapter, but the question is, who told Armin about the SGC, surly Jamila would of found out who the leak is? please up date soon
Great chapter, but the question is, who told Armin about the SGC, surly Jamila would of found out who the leak is? please up date soon
7/26/2009 c7 ALIMOO1971
Great chapter, talk about one surprise after another in this chapter, please, please up date soon
Great chapter, talk about one surprise after another in this chapter, please, please up date soon
7/26/2009 c1 jool3
Great chapter again. I for one, enjoy the monstrous chapters as you called them, lol! So I'm looking forward to more soon hopefully?
Great chapter again. I for one, enjoy the monstrous chapters as you called them, lol! So I'm looking forward to more soon hopefully?
6/16/2009 c1 92KellethMetheus
Very well set up and I want to read more it was just too long of chapter and now I have to go save my kids from drowning in the bathtub.
I'll read more soon.
Kelli
Very well set up and I want to read more it was just too long of chapter and now I have to go save my kids from drowning in the bathtub.
I'll read more soon.
Kelli
4/26/2009 c6 jool3
This is great. I can't believe the amount of characterisation and detail you've managed to put in. I'm really looking forward to more. I'm a J/S shipper all the way and I just loved their thoughts when they just touched hands. Very sweet!
This is great. I can't believe the amount of characterisation and detail you've managed to put in. I'm really looking forward to more. I'm a J/S shipper all the way and I just loved their thoughts when they just touched hands. Very sweet!
12/19/2008 c3 Snowdove30
Excellent update. Nice descriptive action scenes. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Excellent update. Nice descriptive action scenes. Looking forward to the next chapter.