for Moonlight10/15/2011 c4 Angie
I love it make more soon ! :D
I love it make more soon ! :D
5/13/2009 c4 rosa1817
"Operation: Steal Books From Kakashi In Order To Woo Hinata in Order to Revive the Uchiha Clan"
XD Brilliant!
update soon please!
"Operation: Steal Books From Kakashi In Order To Woo Hinata in Order to Revive the Uchiha Clan"
XD Brilliant!
update soon please!
4/10/2009 c4 
3NotHereAnymore1234567890
awsome, operation steal books from Kakashi in order to woo Hinata in order to revive the uchiha clan! thats such an awsome title, sasauke's such a smarty, any way hope you update soon, and that your updates longer than this one by a couple pages!
T-O-A-O-P-N
3NotHereAnymore1234567890awsome, operation steal books from Kakashi in order to woo Hinata in order to revive the uchiha clan! thats such an awsome title, sasauke's such a smarty, any way hope you update soon, and that your updates longer than this one by a couple pages!
T-O-A-O-P-N
3/18/2009 c4 9blueangel326
I like helping with names for retarded shit. Although I am strongly affectionate over my "Shakugan." teehee.
Such a short chapter. When I looked over once from my writing, I thought you had somehow managed 8 pages...and then I remembered that you type the whole story as one document. Blegh. I'm looking forward to how this Operation shall go. =D
9blueangel326I like helping with names for retarded shit. Although I am strongly affectionate over my "Shakugan." teehee.
Such a short chapter. When I looked over once from my writing, I thought you had somehow managed 8 pages...and then I remembered that you type the whole story as one document. Blegh. I'm looking forward to how this Operation shall go. =D
3/16/2009 c4 ShikaMariUchiha
LOL! I wonder what Sasuke is going to learn from Kakashi's books. It will be interesting to see how he tries to woo and win Hinata's heart. Hope you update again soon!
LOL! I wonder what Sasuke is going to learn from Kakashi's books. It will be interesting to see how he tries to woo and win Hinata's heart. Hope you update again soon!
9/16/2008 c3 9Reiuko
hehe. the part with hinata imagining orochimaru teaching sasuke etiquette made me laugh. anyway good chapter and update asap! please!
9Reiukohehe. the part with hinata imagining orochimaru teaching sasuke etiquette made me laugh. anyway good chapter and update asap! please!
7/2/2008 c3 9blueangel326
wow. i actually find myself wanting more from a non-canon pairing fanfic... congratulations - you actually made me want to read HinaSasu fanfics now...especially yours. grr-ness.
so, besides the random typos i pointed out to you already, pretty decent...(i can't actually remember what i good fanfic is anymore...i mean, Rugrats sex?)
The RoRo-chan wishes for more (although The RoRo-chan can't talk since The RoRo-chan hasn't updated in like...eons...lol)
9blueangel326wow. i actually find myself wanting more from a non-canon pairing fanfic... congratulations - you actually made me want to read HinaSasu fanfics now...especially yours. grr-ness.
so, besides the random typos i pointed out to you already, pretty decent...(i can't actually remember what i good fanfic is anymore...i mean, Rugrats sex?)
The RoRo-chan wishes for more (although The RoRo-chan can't talk since The RoRo-chan hasn't updated in like...eons...lol)
6/26/2008 c2 25thebookhobbit
I would love to see one of Sasuke's sons with pink hair, just because it would be hilarious.
Moving on;
this is shaping up quite well, it is. A good plot, and it certainly seems like an interesting story will be coming ahead.
25thebookhobbitI would love to see one of Sasuke's sons with pink hair, just because it would be hilarious.
Moving on;
this is shaping up quite well, it is. A good plot, and it certainly seems like an interesting story will be coming ahead.
6/26/2008 c1 thebookhobbit
Sensible!Sasuke is an excellent idea. I'm enjoying your characterization of Hinata and Sasuke; it's good.
I loved the second sentence. '...same amount of emotion as a lampshade" is so random, but fits.
Great job! :D
Sensible!Sasuke is an excellent idea. I'm enjoying your characterization of Hinata and Sasuke; it's good.
I loved the second sentence. '...same amount of emotion as a lampshade" is so random, but fits.
Great job! :D