for From Bella to Edward2/9/2009 c1 
23Rocker-Chick-12345
This is good, but it should rhyme more. Please don't take this as a flame, because it is not. I'm just saying that poems are supposed to rhyme.
23Rocker-Chick-12345This is good, but it should rhyme more. Please don't take this as a flame, because it is not. I'm just saying that poems are supposed to rhyme.