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1/21/2015 c1 1QuillDream19725
Haha that would be funny!
6/7/2011 c1 32TechNomaNcer28
Oh gooood!Yes they must!loool!That was awesome!
2/17/2010 c1 80kirkr0se
#Blinks#

I swear, reading all this HP MWPP fanfiction must be bad for my family. This is the third time I've burst out laughing in the middle of the night.

Absolutely amazing. Why don't you write a sequel, for Minnie? Please? #Starry fangirl eyes#

Sorry if I'm a bother...

~Miss Morte
9/7/2008 c1 16yolapeoples
THAT WAS HILARIOUS!

“We MUST do this in front of Minnie!” PRICELESS!

You rock!

~ Yolapeoples ~
7/4/2008 c1 22rry
Okay! (I haven't read it yet but I must tell you) When you write dialogue, you tend to want to have each speech separated from the last. Like;

"Blah blah blah," Sirius went on, "blah blah blah Remus, blah I blah love, black blah you."

"Wait..." Remus interrupted, looking up from his book finally. "What?"

"Iloveyou?" Sirius mumbled...

Okay, I've read it now and it's rather funny. Like, 'had my brother looking at me weird' funny. So that's good.

Other than the above, it's very good.
6/28/2008 c1 65MinervaEvenstar
That was hilarious, but it was a little difficult to follow because you're supposed to start a new paragraph everytime a new person begins speaking.
6/27/2008 c1 Il'Diko
It was good.. entertainig! Though the form of the dialoge, or the lack of it disturbed me.. But all in all, it was a good idea and I would like to read old Minnys reaction ;) Just put a little more work in it, and it will be great!

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