for Harry Potter and the Wand of Uru2/12/2022 c7 iiNeo
Now that the cat was out of the bag I had hoped he would ask her to keep a distance from him seeing as how he doesn't need to act like past harry around her. And Lily and Lady Malfoy cheating? Not cool bro. I hope they get caught beacuase no mercy to cheater, no one deserves the pain of being cheated on. If they want to fuck get a divorce or something.
Now that the cat was out of the bag I had hoped he would ask her to keep a distance from him seeing as how he doesn't need to act like past harry around her. And Lily and Lady Malfoy cheating? Not cool bro. I hope they get caught beacuase no mercy to cheater, no one deserves the pain of being cheated on. If they want to fuck get a divorce or something.
2/12/2022 c7 
6Yaw6113
Please write the next chapter chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
6Yaw6113Please write the next chapter chapter already. Thank you very much. I really appreciate it and liked it a lot.
2/12/2022 c1 Terracotta Tortilla
Fucking hell. Such an abrupt jump into an unfamiliar story after giving us a bunch of backstory that won't matter. "He only lets this specific person near him and only allows them to touch him". Then you immediately disregard all of that.
Fucking hell. Such an abrupt jump into an unfamiliar story after giving us a bunch of backstory that won't matter. "He only lets this specific person near him and only allows them to touch him". Then you immediately disregard all of that.
2/12/2022 c7 spacecowboy2011
I’d kind of gotten the notion of Altaira being a romance potential, but didn’t expect you to introduce the concept in such a manner. So far, it’s been a really interesting story, looking forward to what you’ve got in store.
I’d kind of gotten the notion of Altaira being a romance potential, but didn’t expect you to introduce the concept in such a manner. So far, it’s been a really interesting story, looking forward to what you’ve got in store.
2/12/2022 c7 Tony McNucklz
I always hated the forearm holster fanon thing that sprung from the 5th movie when they dropped wands out of sleeves. most wands are 9-14 inches. Measure your forarm from inside elbow to below where your wrist articulates, and tell me that it makes sense that an adult, much less a child, could fit a stick there. Bull And if it was like a mokskin pouch with space, why would it be as long as a forarm? why not the size of a wristwatch? and would you trust a piece of yourself to be in a dimensionally funky hole you didn't understand completely?
Right. Missed the part where this is a tranny harry story with everything else going on.
Out.
I always hated the forearm holster fanon thing that sprung from the 5th movie when they dropped wands out of sleeves. most wands are 9-14 inches. Measure your forarm from inside elbow to below where your wrist articulates, and tell me that it makes sense that an adult, much less a child, could fit a stick there. Bull And if it was like a mokskin pouch with space, why would it be as long as a forarm? why not the size of a wristwatch? and would you trust a piece of yourself to be in a dimensionally funky hole you didn't understand completely?
Right. Missed the part where this is a tranny harry story with everything else going on.
Out.
2/9/2022 c1 Sebine
Harry Potter and Jesus Christ Look at the Tits on That One!
given your art for the story
Harry Potter and Jesus Christ Look at the Tits on That One!
given your art for the story
2/7/2022 c6 Guest
More gender bending bullshit on this site, ugh.
I'm so sick of slash and gender bent stories, it's not original, it's not interesting, it's lazy writing and weird fantasies from people that evidently either don't like straight men, or don't like men in general.
3rd fucking story I've read this week that got me hooked only to shoe horn this kinda crap in.
More gender bending bullshit on this site, ugh.
I'm so sick of slash and gender bent stories, it's not original, it's not interesting, it's lazy writing and weird fantasies from people that evidently either don't like straight men, or don't like men in general.
3rd fucking story I've read this week that got me hooked only to shoe horn this kinda crap in.
2/7/2022 c6 1Worldsprayer
As Writing goes: It has much improved and the flow and format of this story is much improved, but that's what one would expect for a story 14 years in the making with 6 chapters. Normally I'd be super excited to see where it goes.
However: The author seems to care less about plot and more about the message: Be gay. When an author has to ask for romance options but that they need to be gay indicates the author does not in fact know what he/she wants to write but DOES know what message/impression to create. Further the obvious, sudden, and not advertised sex-change of the MC sticks this story into one of the smallest of niches in HP fanfic. Sadly, this story could have (and I admit may still) been an excellent example of what-ifs and second-chances of a broken hero.
As HPATSL has been re-started and forked several times, I think I'll fork it now as well. Seeing such a promising tale once again be both abandoned AND used as a politisexual tool is beyond frustrating. Good luck to the author however, 14 years now...wow I feel old.
1WorldsprayerAs Writing goes: It has much improved and the flow and format of this story is much improved, but that's what one would expect for a story 14 years in the making with 6 chapters. Normally I'd be super excited to see where it goes.
However: The author seems to care less about plot and more about the message: Be gay. When an author has to ask for romance options but that they need to be gay indicates the author does not in fact know what he/she wants to write but DOES know what message/impression to create. Further the obvious, sudden, and not advertised sex-change of the MC sticks this story into one of the smallest of niches in HP fanfic. Sadly, this story could have (and I admit may still) been an excellent example of what-ifs and second-chances of a broken hero.
As HPATSL has been re-started and forked several times, I think I'll fork it now as well. Seeing such a promising tale once again be both abandoned AND used as a politisexual tool is beyond frustrating. Good luck to the author however, 14 years now...wow I feel old.