for At long last5/21/2011 c2 
5LisiLouLah
This is a really good start - is there any particular reason you stopped updating? I hope you add more!
Lisa x
5LisiLouLahThis is a really good start - is there any particular reason you stopped updating? I hope you add more!
Lisa x
6/29/2008 c1 1eablack
That's an excellent start. Just like myself, I would get someone to check for spelling/grammar and typos. Everyone makes them and it's smart to get someone to double check. (I've probably made some sort of typo/grammar/spelling mistake in this review) You probably know this better than me though as you've written many more stories than I have but I thought I'd suggest it. Keep writing and I hope to see the next chapter!
E.
1eablackThat's an excellent start. Just like myself, I would get someone to check for spelling/grammar and typos. Everyone makes them and it's smart to get someone to double check. (I've probably made some sort of typo/grammar/spelling mistake in this review) You probably know this better than me though as you've written many more stories than I have but I thought I'd suggest it. Keep writing and I hope to see the next chapter!
E.