for A Mother's Love12/21/2021 c4 Guest
Will rose be a friend to Bella?
Will rose be a friend to Bella?
12/20/2021 c1 Guest
Will Rose be friends with Bella?
Will Rose be friends with Bella?
7/11/2013 c20 crazycats7
I really wish that would you finish this story. I like a lot. I would love to see Bella and the girls get a happy ending.
I really wish that would you finish this story. I like a lot. I would love to see Bella and the girls get a happy ending.
6/30/2013 c9 Ashley
one of the best fanfics i have ever read! nice job!
one of the best fanfics i have ever read! nice job!
3/30/2013 c6 Guest
when will they move in together?/?/
when will they move in together?/?/
7/9/2011 c20 
2BronzeHairedMystery
:o please update the next chapter x I'm in love with this story and would love to find out how it ends x
2BronzeHairedMystery:o please update the next chapter x I'm in love with this story and would love to find out how it ends x
6/10/2011 c4 Lexi
First of all, you had a really good story line going there, I was completely intrigued. The first few chapters were really well written too. But honestly, a child doesnt talk that way at 4 years old, its a little unbelievable. And also, why didnt you drag out the romance and tension between Edward and Bella more? You've given away a huge appeal of the story now. And really, they would not fall in love in a day and Edward would not be that comfortable in that environment in one day. If you re-wrote this story, and fixed up these things I think it would be a really awesome story :) all in all, pretty good writing though
First of all, you had a really good story line going there, I was completely intrigued. The first few chapters were really well written too. But honestly, a child doesnt talk that way at 4 years old, its a little unbelievable. And also, why didnt you drag out the romance and tension between Edward and Bella more? You've given away a huge appeal of the story now. And really, they would not fall in love in a day and Edward would not be that comfortable in that environment in one day. If you re-wrote this story, and fixed up these things I think it would be a really awesome story :) all in all, pretty good writing though
4/17/2011 c20 5EBRAJERCECullen 130
please write more!this is really good! do you know of any similar stories?
5EBRAJERCECullen 130please write more!this is really good! do you know of any similar stories?
8/22/2010 c20 Twilight Lover
Ok this story is freaking amazing so u need to update like now! Please please please update!
Ok this story is freaking amazing so u need to update like now! Please please please update!
6/30/2010 c16 1VanessaRose10
OMG! Dude i totally thought you were going to write that she got better. That's the saddest twist i read in my life.
1VanessaRose10OMG! Dude i totally thought you were going to write that she got better. That's the saddest twist i read in my life.
12/26/2009 c1 Gossip girl
Your story is the BEST EVER ! write more i like it even more than twilight
Your story is the BEST EVER ! write more i like it even more than twilight
10/13/2009 c6 AnniesNotOkayMJ
This is greta really sad though also you used th wrong vein you wrote into her vain instead of vein.
This is greta really sad though also you used th wrong vein you wrote into her vain instead of vein.