for The Sadness I Carry Upon My Shoulders4/22/2014 c1 
9Insane is my name
Well I was so heartbroken when she found him cheating on her... I thought it would be kagura but it was kikyo! Ewww I was so disgusted! But I loved it :-) :-) :-) :-) great job
9Insane is my nameWell I was so heartbroken when she found him cheating on her... I thought it would be kagura but it was kikyo! Ewww I was so disgusted! But I loved it :-) :-) :-) :-) great job
4/16/2014 c1 Guest
Love it!
Love it!
4/23/2013 c1 Guest
Okay, I don't like it so much
Maybe you need it to make it longer, because I didn't believe a single thing of the story
Aren't you a bit curious that in a short time they got back together?
Not believable
Okay, I don't like it so much
Maybe you need it to make it longer, because I didn't believe a single thing of the story
Aren't you a bit curious that in a short time they got back together?
Not believable
3/13/2013 c1 Guest
This story just so stupid , Kagome is really insane and pathetic , I can't help to ask the author that if you are in this situation would you really forgive just like that .
This story just so stupid , Kagome is really insane and pathetic , I can't help to ask the author that if you are in this situation would you really forgive just like that .
11/3/2012 c1 rei-intro-rini
aah...No it wasn't at all wierd for your first Sess/Kag. In-fact it was really nice.
Yes, our modern society has become the kind of place where couples take each-other for granted at times & give into destructive-temptations without thinking about their life-partners. They forget that in-order to make a marriage work 100% is needed from both days people give-up easily on marriage instead of trying to save the marriage- throw away society! SAD
I thought you did capture the issues but you could have emphasized on them a little more..There were a little grammatical mistakes. But their characters seems right & all together it was a really NICE one-shots.
I really love those story that can teach you something VALUABLE & RIGHT, so I also enjoyed it. And who doesn't like happy endings! hehe :D
Thanx for sharing this story! ;)
aah...No it wasn't at all wierd for your first Sess/Kag. In-fact it was really nice.
Yes, our modern society has become the kind of place where couples take each-other for granted at times & give into destructive-temptations without thinking about their life-partners. They forget that in-order to make a marriage work 100% is needed from both days people give-up easily on marriage instead of trying to save the marriage- throw away society! SAD
I thought you did capture the issues but you could have emphasized on them a little more..There were a little grammatical mistakes. But their characters seems right & all together it was a really NICE one-shots.
I really love those story that can teach you something VALUABLE & RIGHT, so I also enjoyed it. And who doesn't like happy endings! hehe :D
Thanx for sharing this story! ;)
1/2/2011 c1 1MissLuver09
WOW! lol that was interesting, at 1st i was thinking that they wouldnt stay together *sad~face*
1MissLuver09WOW! lol that was interesting, at 1st i was thinking that they wouldnt stay together *sad~face*
10/3/2009 c1 x
that was so cute because i love sesshome (and inugome)
but inuyasha shouldve gone to hell with kikyo
why kagome stop them D:
ah what am i saying, i love kagome with inu or sessh
kagome is so cute and so is this story
good job
that was so cute because i love sesshome (and inugome)
but inuyasha shouldve gone to hell with kikyo
why kagome stop them D:
ah what am i saying, i love kagome with inu or sessh
kagome is so cute and so is this story
good job
5/19/2009 c1 AvidRabid
i read it... but it was really kind of poorly written actually...
Sesshoumarus big speach about how he loves her and hes a jack-ass and all that... you need to go back and reread all of that... i feel like you wrote this story on a word document and just looked up synonyms for every other word... causing the flow to be disrupted... and you change tense every now and again... not in any dialog thank god, but it does change... anywho you probably should reread the whole thing... some heavy editing/revising is in order i think...
it was desent...
if you think about it in terms of a novice writter then it was good...
better luck next time...
i read it... but it was really kind of poorly written actually...
Sesshoumarus big speach about how he loves her and hes a jack-ass and all that... you need to go back and reread all of that... i feel like you wrote this story on a word document and just looked up synonyms for every other word... causing the flow to be disrupted... and you change tense every now and again... not in any dialog thank god, but it does change... anywho you probably should reread the whole thing... some heavy editing/revising is in order i think...
it was desent...
if you think about it in terms of a novice writter then it was good...
better luck next time...
5/9/2009 c1 InuYashaAmber909
Vary good, a little twisted with the affairs. But I liked the ending and it was vary well structured. Well done.
Vary good, a little twisted with the affairs. But I liked the ending and it was vary well structured. Well done.
10/11/2008 c1 CloverBabe
really really really disappointed in this one.
let Kaggie so graceously go back to Sessho without a sound fight? just him saying "i love you" made her crawl back to him so easily especially after he totally cheated on her? i don't think so.
seriously.
super disappointed.
and a bit ticked that you would make Kaggie such a weak character here.
really really really disappointed in this one.
let Kaggie so graceously go back to Sessho without a sound fight? just him saying "i love you" made her crawl back to him so easily especially after he totally cheated on her? i don't think so.
seriously.
super disappointed.
and a bit ticked that you would make Kaggie such a weak character here.