
6/9/2012 c1
6HP-Lette-Fan
I like how you wrote the story as a decrescendo of grief and then the crescendo of happiness and love.

I like how you wrote the story as a decrescendo of grief and then the crescendo of happiness and love.
11/22/2011 c1
4Pure Alethea
This was great! I love how you ended each paragraph with 'Life never has a Happy Ending'. You've done a great job! I even had a tear at the side of my eye! Keep writing!
Best Wishes,
~ Pure Alethea

This was great! I love how you ended each paragraph with 'Life never has a Happy Ending'. You've done a great job! I even had a tear at the side of my eye! Keep writing!
Best Wishes,
~ Pure Alethea
6/13/2011 c1 Everything Has Changed
It's good...
'I am... I... Fred...' Harry stammered.
But I thought you were Harry?
Well that was actually my first thought when I read that...
- SaraHunterOfArtemis
It's good...
'I am... I... Fred...' Harry stammered.
But I thought you were Harry?
Well that was actually my first thought when I read that...
- SaraHunterOfArtemis
8/7/2008 c1
10TheWordFountain
At first, I wasn't sure I would like it. As I was going through it, I felt it was almost too repetitive. But then as I got to the parts where it kind of switched around, and things became happy again - I had to say I really ended up liking it. Good job!

At first, I wasn't sure I would like it. As I was going through it, I felt it was almost too repetitive. But then as I got to the parts where it kind of switched around, and things became happy again - I had to say I really ended up liking it. Good job!
7/13/2008 c1 Guest
that was sweet.
that was sweet.
7/13/2008 c1
80Moonprincess92
That was very beautiful. I loved how it skipped from moment to moment, and the quote you used was great-it really showed HG. I loved it. = D

That was very beautiful. I loved how it skipped from moment to moment, and the quote you used was great-it really showed HG. I loved it. = D
7/7/2008 c1
1twinklewind
A bit confusing with the timeframes, but sorta cute. Though "happy endings" are a bit cliche.

A bit confusing with the timeframes, but sorta cute. Though "happy endings" are a bit cliche.
7/6/2008 c1
28Kore-of-Myth
I enjoyed this. The theming, repition, and characterizations were brilliant.
Keep Writing!

I enjoyed this. The theming, repition, and characterizations were brilliant.
Keep Writing!