
2/24/2018 c6
2SoccerforlifeKitty1
I wonder why you discontinued this when its so interesting and I want to know what happens next.

I wonder why you discontinued this when its so interesting and I want to know what happens next.
2/24/2018 c7 SoccerforlifeKitty1
The chapter is great, but I wonder when the next chapter comes out. I bet its a good one
The chapter is great, but I wonder when the next chapter comes out. I bet its a good one
1/29/2018 c7
2Leonarda Hamato Prime
Please please
Continje the story please
Is awesome.
And Red is capture.!
Prowl is very angry with Jazz. Huggg!

Please please
Continje the story please
Is awesome.
And Red is capture.!
Prowl is very angry with Jazz. Huggg!
5/12/2017 c3 SoccerforlifeKitty
i dont care how short, its nice that you put so much effort into these chapters, and i think that is awesome and sweet of you to take time from your day to make these chapters.
i dont care how short, its nice that you put so much effort into these chapters, and i think that is awesome and sweet of you to take time from your day to make these chapters.
5/11/2017 c2 Alicia
Even though i didnt read all the chapters i think so far your story is incredible! I never read someone elses fan fic stories but Id have to say your is the best one Ive read so far and i think its going to be amazing.
Even though i didnt read all the chapters i think so far your story is incredible! I never read someone elses fan fic stories but Id have to say your is the best one Ive read so far and i think its going to be amazing.
4/9/2017 c1 Princess Kitty
It. Is. Great! I never thought of it! Your amazing!
It. Is. Great! I never thought of it! Your amazing!
10/6/2014 c7 MORE
I loved it! Make more fast!
I loved it! Make more fast!
10/4/2013 c7
14Yogiplier
oh my gosh. poor jazz... and prowl
i would love if you continued this story, its so cool

oh my gosh. poor jazz... and prowl
i would love if you continued this story, its so cool
9/23/2009 c7
2creepy-wolf
This is... ha hah...so fun...ha haah... contiune... please.
Oh and make Sunny and Red a pair, that would be fun and don't turn them back to mech's.

This is... ha hah...so fun...ha haah... contiune... please.
Oh and make Sunny and Red a pair, that would be fun and don't turn them back to mech's.
3/16/2009 c7 flareyphoenix
could you hurry up and finish the next chapter then?
i really wanna see what happens next!
could you hurry up and finish the next chapter then?
i really wanna see what happens next!