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8/29/2008 c1 35The Famous Fire Lady M
OMFG. That has to be one of the funniest crack! song-fics I have eever seen.
7/31/2008 c1 1LeLunaTango
I liked the way this was almost like a crack fic, but the last line brought it back together and it had a point. The last line was really good. I also loved the line "Oh gosh! You didn't give him porn did you?" It makes you wonder if roger ever gave him porn and what happened... You should write a fic about that.

One thing i didn't like was there was so much dialogue and not quite enough... whats it called... 'not dialogue' you need a little more description of what's going on, and you could even make it funnier that way. they can DO funny things, not just say funny things. I also don't like the way benny and mr grey walk in and disappear in such a short time... they need more time... Roger should have hid behind benny... or something... And what's mr grey doign there anyway? Benny is the landlord... Mr grey is just his stepfather. I think you should have made the benny part longer and funnier, and made mark get benny to sing the happy song.

Do you know what else would have been funny? At the end mark should have been quietly humming the happy song to himself... that woudl be funny!
7/14/2008 c1 5choklit-froggie
LMAO That was CRAZY! Did you make the Happy Song up? Either way, it's pretty darn happy. Horay for crackfics!
7/7/2008 c1 8Hazel Fae
Hi,

HAPPY SONG! Is that a real song, or did you make it up? Either way, very funny crackfic!

Yours,

Toni
7/6/2008 c1 7EB91
hahaha! I love Mark at the end. XD
7/2/2008 c1 23broadwaybaby4205
Hahahahahahaha! This was hilarious! I loved it! Amazing job! *dies laughing*
7/2/2008 c1 isabella nightmare
go mark! lmao
7/2/2008 c1 28ILikeScarvesAndGuitars
ROFL that was actually hilarious!
7/2/2008 c1 A RENThead Reviewer
LMAO that was so funny. I love the Happy Song. Roger and Angel's reactions are hilarious.

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