for Invisible Boundaries Rewrite10/23/2018 c1 ChaoticMinds
Lmao, that last part cracked me up so bad! It was awesome! I hope you plan on updating soon, I love how original it is. I've never seen an OC story as the Bovino Baby's sibling.
Btw, it says romance in the genre, but what is the pairing going to be?
Lmao, that last part cracked me up so bad! It was awesome! I hope you plan on updating soon, I love how original it is. I've never seen an OC story as the Bovino Baby's sibling.
Btw, it says romance in the genre, but what is the pairing going to be?
3/29/2015 c1 Guest
hehe.
updates!
hehe.
updates!
9/24/2008 c2 Opitomi
xDD
Typical typical Tsuna reaction.
Lol, I remember when I first heard Hibara say, "I'll bite you to death.." I thought he was some sort of freakk.
Update son! 3
xDD
Typical typical Tsuna reaction.
Lol, I remember when I first heard Hibara say, "I'll bite you to death.." I thought he was some sort of freakk.
Update son! 3
8/13/2008 c2 
2saberbride
OMG yay! I've been waiting for the next chapter :D! Nice, very nice, and I only spotted a few grammatical errors(if you need someone else to look over it for mistakes, there are always Beta Readers)... does Hibari really have green eyes...? I guess I never really looked that close before, I just assumed they were grey or purple or something...eh, whatever. Hehe, I love the interaction between Ayumi and Hibari! I wonder who she's going to end up with, though...Can't wait for the next update, this chapter was great.
2saberbrideOMG yay! I've been waiting for the next chapter :D! Nice, very nice, and I only spotted a few grammatical errors(if you need someone else to look over it for mistakes, there are always Beta Readers)... does Hibari really have green eyes...? I guess I never really looked that close before, I just assumed they were grey or purple or something...eh, whatever. Hehe, I love the interaction between Ayumi and Hibari! I wonder who she's going to end up with, though...Can't wait for the next update, this chapter was great.
8/13/2008 c2 46GammaTron
O.O? LAMBO? AYUMI is LAMBO'S SISTER? AWESOME TO THE EXTREME! ... DAMN YOU, RYOHEI SASAGAWA! I'm loving this story so much! Hurry and update it!
46GammaTronO.O? LAMBO? AYUMI is LAMBO'S SISTER? AWESOME TO THE EXTREME! ... DAMN YOU, RYOHEI SASAGAWA! I'm loving this story so much! Hurry and update it!
7/19/2008 c1 GammaTron
So far, I give this story a 9.9 out of a perfect 10. Reason, not enough funny. But still this is an amazing story so far, even though it is only one chapter long.
So far, I give this story a 9.9 out of a perfect 10. Reason, not enough funny. But still this is an amazing story so far, even though it is only one chapter long.
7/15/2008 c1 2saberbride
Yay! A well-written and original OC story(but you might want to check over your punctuation for the end of quotation marks)! And I figured out who her brother was as soon as her looks were mentioned XD Story and Ayumi sound interesting so far and I like the idea! Can't wait for the next chapter.
2saberbrideYay! A well-written and original OC story(but you might want to check over your punctuation for the end of quotation marks)! And I figured out who her brother was as soon as her looks were mentioned XD Story and Ayumi sound interesting so far and I like the idea! Can't wait for the next chapter.
7/11/2008 c1 Opitomi
Haha, I love the ending of this chapter with Tsuna. XD
It took me a fews times and a few read-overs for me to figure out who Ayumi's littler brother was. I guess I'm slow like you...
Anyways, it seems really good so far, so update soon! ^^
Haha, I love the ending of this chapter with Tsuna. XD
It took me a fews times and a few read-overs for me to figure out who Ayumi's littler brother was. I guess I'm slow like you...
Anyways, it seems really good so far, so update soon! ^^
7/3/2008 c1 5FlickeringLightsOfCamana
This is original.
This is well written.
I look forward to updates, because there WILL be updates, right?
¬_¬!
5FlickeringLightsOfCamanaThis is original.
This is well written.
I look forward to updates, because there WILL be updates, right?
¬_¬!