for Spiral Static2/4 c2 
1drboggs
Brilliantly done, tasteful without sacrificing the reality of sex. It's so difficult to pull off, and the characters are acting in ways that make so much sense - Bella getting overwhelmed by his intensity was a really touching detail. I'm not sure if you still read reviews, but kudos regardless.
1drboggsBrilliantly done, tasteful without sacrificing the reality of sex. It's so difficult to pull off, and the characters are acting in ways that make so much sense - Bella getting overwhelmed by his intensity was a really touching detail. I'm not sure if you still read reviews, but kudos regardless.
9/8/2024 c1 EndlessGloaming
That was hot as hell and captured nicely the experience of a first orgasm when you don't know what to expect.
That was hot as hell and captured nicely the experience of a first orgasm when you don't know what to expect.
11/29/2019 c9 Justme
Great story, I enjoyed it a lot!
Great story, I enjoyed it a lot!
1/25/2019 c3 Guest
Bella is the worst...she comes off as such a brat
Bella is the worst...she comes off as such a brat
11/10/2017 c9 11Danielle Pitter
Edward is SOO not 90210 Luke Perry Hair. Oh NOO. Not even. Nope. You can’t make me. NOOPE. Sorry lol.
11Danielle PitterEdward is SOO not 90210 Luke Perry Hair. Oh NOO. Not even. Nope. You can’t make me. NOOPE. Sorry lol.
11/10/2017 c8 Danielle Pitter
I truly don’t understand what. Edwards. Problem. Is. Isn’t it bad enough he forced B to marry him for sex but worse when he’d already agreed to change her if they did marry?! I mean how long did he think they’d keep this up and keep Volturi in the dark? They didn’t travel to Italy but come on. Edward needs to grow TF up and realize that time. Is. Ticking! The pool scene at the end was cute tho lol.
I truly don’t understand what. Edwards. Problem. Is. Isn’t it bad enough he forced B to marry him for sex but worse when he’d already agreed to change her if they did marry?! I mean how long did he think they’d keep this up and keep Volturi in the dark? They didn’t travel to Italy but come on. Edward needs to grow TF up and realize that time. Is. Ticking! The pool scene at the end was cute tho lol.
7/18/2016 c3 jk
is bella really that stupid? Shit do you even realize how just plain dumb you've made her character? First off, if you have to beg and plead for your man to sleep with you...LOL maybe hes just not that into you. Second, Edward cleary stated that alice saw their plane crashing just because they were on it. Without them on it, it doesn't crash. So gee bella I wonder what could make the plane crash? It couldn't possibly be a super strong vampire could it? Edward says "you don't want me to rip a whole in the side of the plane do you?" And ...with that comment...still nothing clicks for her? She STILL pushes him to allow her to give him a hand job?
Shes just so incredibly fucking stupid, its amazing. She risked the lives of everyone on that plane why? Because shes a selfish stupid little bitch?
is bella really that stupid? Shit do you even realize how just plain dumb you've made her character? First off, if you have to beg and plead for your man to sleep with you...LOL maybe hes just not that into you. Second, Edward cleary stated that alice saw their plane crashing just because they were on it. Without them on it, it doesn't crash. So gee bella I wonder what could make the plane crash? It couldn't possibly be a super strong vampire could it? Edward says "you don't want me to rip a whole in the side of the plane do you?" And ...with that comment...still nothing clicks for her? She STILL pushes him to allow her to give him a hand job?
Shes just so incredibly fucking stupid, its amazing. She risked the lives of everyone on that plane why? Because shes a selfish stupid little bitch?
6/12/2016 c3 jk
bella brought her HOLEY ORANGE SHIRT on her honeymoon? seriously?
bella brought her HOLEY ORANGE SHIRT on her honeymoon? seriously?
11/9/2015 c9 KrispyFree
You have talent. That was a wonderful, fun and tear jerking ride.(tears of joy, of fear and just tears) Thank you for sharing your vision of my favorite characters with the world.
I forgot to check the dates of publishing so if it's old I hope you're still writing but if it's recent, get busy with a new one!
Chive on!
You have talent. That was a wonderful, fun and tear jerking ride.(tears of joy, of fear and just tears) Thank you for sharing your vision of my favorite characters with the world.
I forgot to check the dates of publishing so if it's old I hope you're still writing but if it's recent, get busy with a new one!
Chive on!
4/29/2015 c9 Guest
Rereading. Still good second time around
Rereading. Still good second time around