for I Love You, Temperance Brennan10/11/2008 c18 Chloe Jaeger
This is great work, Vampire! Your execution of Booth and Brennan is near perfect. At times, I feel your grasp at thin air, but you manage well enough. But perhaps the two women found are unrelated? The condition is genitic, but it's not impossible to find two women, of different race with the same ailment. And considering that they are of different ethnicities, it's very possible. Finding them in the same crime scene? Not as likely, but very possible all the same.
And if the two women are to be unrelated, it would give an opportunity for Brennan and Booth to spilt up for (on investigation) the first time in weeks!
This is great work, Vampire! Your execution of Booth and Brennan is near perfect. At times, I feel your grasp at thin air, but you manage well enough. But perhaps the two women found are unrelated? The condition is genitic, but it's not impossible to find two women, of different race with the same ailment. And considering that they are of different ethnicities, it's very possible. Finding them in the same crime scene? Not as likely, but very possible all the same.
And if the two women are to be unrelated, it would give an opportunity for Brennan and Booth to spilt up for (on investigation) the first time in weeks!
8/29/2008 c1 
71BlackxValentine
I think that the show should have ended like this...X3 great job so far..poor Booth!
71BlackxValentineI think that the show should have ended like this...X3 great job so far..poor Booth!
8/7/2008 c15 iamwriter
I like the case being a part of this story, it makes it more realistic. Pregnant woman, hm do we see an new part of the story for bones and booth?
I like the case being a part of this story, it makes it more realistic. Pregnant woman, hm do we see an new part of the story for bones and booth?
8/7/2008 c14 iamwriter
Birng Sully back so Booth can finish him off, and then even maybe leave a little for Max and Angela to take apart! (Ok, yeah so I dont like Sully- he is NOT Booth)
Poor things better eat soon!
Birng Sully back so Booth can finish him off, and then even maybe leave a little for Max and Angela to take apart! (Ok, yeah so I dont like Sully- he is NOT Booth)
Poor things better eat soon!
8/7/2008 c6 iamwriter
I love Fluff, I have lots of Fluff bunnies and they are cute and produce lots more Fluff bunnies-:)
I love Fluff, I have lots of Fluff bunnies and they are cute and produce lots more Fluff bunnies-:)
8/5/2008 c18 bb-4ever
great couple of chapters. love that they can't keep their hands off each other and she's thinking about him in bed whilst she's surrounded by bones. look forward to more soon
great couple of chapters. love that they can't keep their hands off each other and she's thinking about him in bed whilst she's surrounded by bones. look forward to more soon
8/5/2008 c18 Aching Bones
Hi there,
Loved both of these chapters...Booth was being very naughty in her office...I think it woke him up a bit when Bones accidently hurt his shoulder...Poor Cam, it can not be easy for her to see them together or know that they have been together, even though Booth and her are long over...
Looking forward to finding out more about these two ladies...
Ger
Hi there,
Loved both of these chapters...Booth was being very naughty in her office...I think it woke him up a bit when Bones accidently hurt his shoulder...Poor Cam, it can not be easy for her to see them together or know that they have been together, even though Booth and her are long over...
Looking forward to finding out more about these two ladies...
Ger
8/4/2008 c18 csimesser1
you should have both of the victims tied to someone in the lab that would be a real page turner you doing a really good job on this story can't wait to read the next chapter keep up the great work
you should have both of the victims tied to someone in the lab that would be a real page turner you doing a really good job on this story can't wait to read the next chapter keep up the great work
8/4/2008 c18 35TheLifeILive
That was a great couple chapters!
I'm very intrigued by the case, awesome job! And don't worry, I'm sure most of us know next to nothing about foresnic science. At least I won't know if a couple facts are off:)
Terrific job!
Leah
35TheLifeILiveThat was a great couple chapters!
I'm very intrigued by the case, awesome job! And don't worry, I'm sure most of us know next to nothing about foresnic science. At least I won't know if a couple facts are off:)
Terrific job!
Leah