for Smile, It's the End of the World9/28/2012 c1 
38Hummus and Peeta
Omg that was sooooo good! I started crying! I hope u got an A for that!
38Hummus and PeetaOmg that was sooooo good! I started crying! I hope u got an A for that!
7/3/2010 c1 3come.josephine.95
You wrote this in grade seven? That's pretty amazing, not gonna lie. Sad ending, but I like it anyway. :)
3come.josephine.95You wrote this in grade seven? That's pretty amazing, not gonna lie. Sad ending, but I like it anyway. :)
1/8/2009 c1 14Irish Story Teller
This is very well written. :) You did a good job portraying how some passengers might've felt during the sinkin.
14Irish Story TellerThis is very well written. :) You did a good job portraying how some passengers might've felt during the sinkin.
9/7/2008 c1 Never Let Go
I thought that this was a fairly good fanfiction and although you don't get too much into the personality of the charector the emotions were potrayed well. The ending was also alright though I believe you could have added a bit more detail to the story but that might just be my own personal writing preferance and have nothing to do with you. All in all it was very good writing with a tragic ending and it made me think " wow. and she was so close to life!" You should be proud. :)
I thought that this was a fairly good fanfiction and although you don't get too much into the personality of the charector the emotions were potrayed well. The ending was also alright though I believe you could have added a bit more detail to the story but that might just be my own personal writing preferance and have nothing to do with you. All in all it was very good writing with a tragic ending and it made me think " wow. and she was so close to life!" You should be proud. :)
7/9/2008 c1 14Bardess of Avon
This was really, really good. Seriously; my mouth was hanging open as I read this. We don't even know this girl's name and I felt for her! This was truly a piece of amazing work. My only nitpick-and it's a very small one-is that you mention her life-vest as being orange and I don't think they were orange. See? I told you it was small.
Anyway, excellent work! I can't believe this doesn't have reviews already!
14Bardess of AvonThis was really, really good. Seriously; my mouth was hanging open as I read this. We don't even know this girl's name and I felt for her! This was truly a piece of amazing work. My only nitpick-and it's a very small one-is that you mention her life-vest as being orange and I don't think they were orange. See? I told you it was small.
Anyway, excellent work! I can't believe this doesn't have reviews already!