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9/21/2008 c2 5Moreta Reborn
I DON'T FLAME. I only give constructive criticism.

Get a beta who works on spelling, or use spell check on your word processing software. Please. You need it.
9/4/2008 c2 Ulquiorra-Schiffer-4
i love it
7/11/2008 c2 98silver-nightstorm
A few minor mistakes... in eragon's POV, at the begining...

so far FROM a city

That's about it. I like the way that the story is coming along, it's going slowly, but not too slow. I really like how it's coming along. Thanks for the dedication! :)

7/10/2008 c1 silver-nightstorm
I really enjoyed it. The storyline started a bit confusing-ish, cause I thought Eragon was the Eragon in the present story. I really like the storyline so far, keep on working on it!
7/8/2008 c1 Jessie

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