for If Every Word I Said Could Make You Laugh
19/13/2013 c12 Marie Mermaids
I wasn't expecting that.. but it was a good chapter. I felt like crying myself.
I wasn't expecting that.. but it was a good chapter. I felt like crying myself.
9/13/2013 c3 Marie Mermaids
Yes! It is so perfect. I was having a bad day and you have made it all better. Thank you
Yes! It is so perfect. I was having a bad day and you have made it all better. Thank you
9/13/2013 c1 Marie Mermaids
Never have I loved a first chapter so much. Honestly! I was caught up in it and there were weird things going on inside my head ( " ooh , that was a nice sentence, look at that arrangement" ). Then I got completely lost in the story. I love how Bella sounds and can't wait to find out the rest.
Never have I loved a first chapter so much. Honestly! I was caught up in it and there were weird things going on inside my head ( " ooh , that was a nice sentence, look at that arrangement" ). Then I got completely lost in the story. I love how Bella sounds and can't wait to find out the rest.
8/23/2013 c25 Guest
"And cheers to waiting no longer." Jumps up and down clapping ala Alice. lol
"And cheers to waiting no longer." Jumps up and down clapping ala Alice. lol
8/23/2013 c26 SanguineTaurean
I'm so glad their first kiss was private and they were able to just be in the moment without the others barging in on them. It was such a sweet time! They deserved it all.
I'm so glad their first kiss was private and they were able to just be in the moment without the others barging in on them. It was such a sweet time! They deserved it all.
8/23/2013 c23 SanguineTaurean
Tanbitch called him "Edward" instead of "Eddie." I really hope this is the end of her and that relationship is finally O.V.E.R.
Tanbitch called him "Edward" instead of "Eddie." I really hope this is the end of her and that relationship is finally O.V.E.R.
8/23/2013 c22 SanguineTaurean
This is a really great story and gets better with each chapter. Maybe I just want them to move on with the relationship, too. lol
This is a really great story and gets better with each chapter. Maybe I just want them to move on with the relationship, too. lol
8/23/2013 c20 SanguineTaurean
Bella pegged Edward at the end of this chapter. He really is being so sweet with her.
Bella pegged Edward at the end of this chapter. He really is being so sweet with her.
8/22/2013 c15 SanguineTaurean
Since Edward broke up with his long time girlfriend, Tanya, he really isn't in shape for another real relationship as he would be with Bella. Maybe he just needs to screw Tanya out of his system and he doesn't want to hurt Bella...even though he is killing her. Whatever. Men can be such arses.
Since Edward broke up with his long time girlfriend, Tanya, he really isn't in shape for another real relationship as he would be with Bella. Maybe he just needs to screw Tanya out of his system and he doesn't want to hurt Bella...even though he is killing her. Whatever. Men can be such arses.
8/22/2013 c12 SanguineTaurean
"...neither of us knowing it was the last real night we would spend together as best friends." I take that last bit as being a little ominous.
"...neither of us knowing it was the last real night we would spend together as best friends." I take that last bit as being a little ominous.