
6/8/2014 c1 Shadowgirl666
Your story is amazing from what I seen the only problem I had reading it was the lack of seperation for the "spoken words" from the discriptive part of the story.
Your story is amazing from what I seen the only problem I had reading it was the lack of seperation for the "spoken words" from the discriptive part of the story.
4/1/2009 c1
8DramaQueen92
that is a fucking good story! I love the colourful language that Amara (Haruka) comes out with.

that is a fucking good story! I love the colourful language that Amara (Haruka) comes out with.
11/13/2008 c1
5silver-midnite
This was a good story. I enjoyed it. the only thing i disliked was the fact that there was a glitch creating odd symbols instead of quotation marks. maybe that was just my computer though. great job!

This was a good story. I enjoyed it. the only thing i disliked was the fact that there was a glitch creating odd symbols instead of quotation marks. maybe that was just my computer though. great job!
7/25/2008 c1
20Ruka-Roxy83
This is really cute. If you ever get a chance you might wanna go back and use spell check on this. I really like the twist you put with the characters we already know. Also need to break it up on different lines when different people are talking and your "" are writen as squares.

This is really cute. If you ever get a chance you might wanna go back and use spell check on this. I really like the twist you put with the characters we already know. Also need to break it up on different lines when different people are talking and your "" are writen as squares.
7/9/2008 c1 usagiharuka
this story was so sexy. i LOVE serena/amara stories and this was one of the best! please write another! i rather have setsuna with minako and ami with makoto but u made the characters work with with their pair. please write another or sequel for amara/serena
this story was so sexy. i LOVE serena/amara stories and this was one of the best! please write another! i rather have setsuna with minako and ami with makoto but u made the characters work with with their pair. please write another or sequel for amara/serena