for The File Without Murder7/9/2012 c7 
4stxrdusty
Yay! Happy ending! I've wanted to read Booth paper the whole fic! Super funny and cute! I thought that the betting pool was really awesome and then Brennan and Angela dishing was hilarious. So yeah, loved the fic.
Okay now, my sister just came and asked me if there were any fics in the Bones fandom that everybody knows about because there are some in the Homestuck fandom (which she reads) that everybody knows about. I told her "no" and then showed her how any fanfics there are on here under Bones, I think I convinced her after showing her that; which reminds me. I have like a hundred stories favorited on FF and I don't know if that's normal of not, in my defense I have only 6 authors favorited and one is my sister and one is my best friend, so that's probably in normal range. So what do you think? Am I a weirdo? :)
Once again, great fic, and I had an amazing time writing these reviews. 3
4stxrdustyYay! Happy ending! I've wanted to read Booth paper the whole fic! Super funny and cute! I thought that the betting pool was really awesome and then Brennan and Angela dishing was hilarious. So yeah, loved the fic.
Okay now, my sister just came and asked me if there were any fics in the Bones fandom that everybody knows about because there are some in the Homestuck fandom (which she reads) that everybody knows about. I told her "no" and then showed her how any fanfics there are on here under Bones, I think I convinced her after showing her that; which reminds me. I have like a hundred stories favorited on FF and I don't know if that's normal of not, in my defense I have only 6 authors favorited and one is my sister and one is my best friend, so that's probably in normal range. So what do you think? Am I a weirdo? :)
Once again, great fic, and I had an amazing time writing these reviews. 3
7/9/2012 c6 stxrdusty
Super adorable! Your writing style is really funny and the way you write with B&B is super awesome. There was a bit of an issue with the formatting at the beginning of the chapter 'cause a whole bunch of the dialogue got compressed into a single paragraph and some of the dialogue later in the chapter didn't have punctuation, but other than that this chapter was fantastically written. I will admit now that clever and socially intelligent Brennan is starting to bother me; but my opinion is more based on my belief that Brennan would never give Booth some kind of pet name and that she would rarely, if ever, call him Seeley because to her he's Booth, and not really based on your actual writing. I've also started to notice that Booth seems somewhat out of character and rather transparent; but again, just my opinion.
So yeah, onto general communication. My favorite color is purple, what's yours? :)
Super adorable! Your writing style is really funny and the way you write with B&B is super awesome. There was a bit of an issue with the formatting at the beginning of the chapter 'cause a whole bunch of the dialogue got compressed into a single paragraph and some of the dialogue later in the chapter didn't have punctuation, but other than that this chapter was fantastically written. I will admit now that clever and socially intelligent Brennan is starting to bother me; but my opinion is more based on my belief that Brennan would never give Booth some kind of pet name and that she would rarely, if ever, call him Seeley because to her he's Booth, and not really based on your actual writing. I've also started to notice that Booth seems somewhat out of character and rather transparent; but again, just my opinion.
So yeah, onto general communication. My favorite color is purple, what's yours? :)
7/9/2012 c5 stxrdusty
So like, totally amazing like, awesome like, super hilarious and cute like...I loved it! Awesome job collaborating for this chapter! And the way you fit Angela's dress idea into this chapter was super funny. :) Nicely written once again.
Onto other stuff now, it's not that I don't like school, it's that I don't like the amount of homework students are given and I don't really know how to talk to my peers without feeling awkward, I actually adore learning and I find school fun; which is why I'm bummed about having three summer assignments this summer. Anywho, nice chapter, I only wish I could write this well. :)
So like, totally amazing like, awesome like, super hilarious and cute like...I loved it! Awesome job collaborating for this chapter! And the way you fit Angela's dress idea into this chapter was super funny. :) Nicely written once again.
Onto other stuff now, it's not that I don't like school, it's that I don't like the amount of homework students are given and I don't really know how to talk to my peers without feeling awkward, I actually adore learning and I find school fun; which is why I'm bummed about having three summer assignments this summer. Anywho, nice chapter, I only wish I could write this well. :)
7/9/2012 c4 stxrdusty
Yay! I had Mac 'n' Cheese for lunch, but mine came out of a box, so not as awesome as Brennan's. And I really like "Inner Angela" it totally goes with clever Brennan's personality, so super cool. I can't wait to see what movie they're going to watch; it's going to be epically awkward or super fluffy, either's totally fine with me.
So I'm back! There was meatballs and salad for dinner too, plus I got to eat rice left over from lunch! And then I got to each ice cream! We had chocolate milkshake and cookie dough, so I took some of both and ate it while reading this chapter, totally delicious. :)
Yay! I had Mac 'n' Cheese for lunch, but mine came out of a box, so not as awesome as Brennan's. And I really like "Inner Angela" it totally goes with clever Brennan's personality, so super cool. I can't wait to see what movie they're going to watch; it's going to be epically awkward or super fluffy, either's totally fine with me.
So I'm back! There was meatballs and salad for dinner too, plus I got to eat rice left over from lunch! And then I got to each ice cream! We had chocolate milkshake and cookie dough, so I took some of both and ate it while reading this chapter, totally delicious. :)
7/9/2012 c3 stxrdusty
Hmm, so first I noticed that a lot of places where apostrophes should be quotation marks were used instead. I'm certain this is not your fault as in most keyboards they reside on the same key, plus I've seen other people do this before. Next, I'm still really liking clever Brennan, she is awesome! And the last line of the chapter is some super awesome foreshadowing that makes people want to read the next chapter; also, the line that you used doesn't fit into all fics, but fits really well in yours because of the more humorous writing style that I think this story has (just my opinion). So yeppers, awesome.
My favorite thing on earth would probably be gymnastics, or maybe food or stories (oh yeah, the word stories encompasses both novels, picture books, and fanfiction; plus, movies and TV shows are arguably part of the title of stories as well). Yep, and my favorite event at gymnastics is vault and my favorite food is pasta; which is what I have to go eat now, TIME FOR DINNER! :D Oh, and I like smilie faces. :) And hearts. 3
Hmm, so first I noticed that a lot of places where apostrophes should be quotation marks were used instead. I'm certain this is not your fault as in most keyboards they reside on the same key, plus I've seen other people do this before. Next, I'm still really liking clever Brennan, she is awesome! And the last line of the chapter is some super awesome foreshadowing that makes people want to read the next chapter; also, the line that you used doesn't fit into all fics, but fits really well in yours because of the more humorous writing style that I think this story has (just my opinion). So yeppers, awesome.
My favorite thing on earth would probably be gymnastics, or maybe food or stories (oh yeah, the word stories encompasses both novels, picture books, and fanfiction; plus, movies and TV shows are arguably part of the title of stories as well). Yep, and my favorite event at gymnastics is vault and my favorite food is pasta; which is what I have to go eat now, TIME FOR DINNER! :D Oh, and I like smilie faces. :) And hearts. 3
7/9/2012 c2 stxrdusty
So you thrive on reviews do you? Well here's another one!
I like how you've added this whole new side of Brennan's personality that we never get to see on TV. It may be out of character and not something that is anywhere near canon, but I think its really clever and I like it. It's good to see someone writing something original and really taking on creative license here on FF. This is also well written.
One other thing, so you thrive on reviews, well I thrive on music and gymnastics. :D *does duck face and tries to look cool but fails miserably*
So you thrive on reviews do you? Well here's another one!
I like how you've added this whole new side of Brennan's personality that we never get to see on TV. It may be out of character and not something that is anywhere near canon, but I think its really clever and I like it. It's good to see someone writing something original and really taking on creative license here on FF. This is also well written.
One other thing, so you thrive on reviews, well I thrive on music and gymnastics. :D *does duck face and tries to look cool but fails miserably*
7/9/2012 c1 stxrdusty
So normally I don't review every chapter of a fic unless the story is ongoing, but your request for reviews and talking totally enticed me, so I'm going to write something after every chapter. So yeah. :)
Anywho, your idea behind this fic is totally brilliant! Its really cool that you thought that Brennan might already know that both her and Booth have feelings for each other and they instead choose to dance around each other 'cause they're afraid of getting hurt. This chapter had some insight into B&B's characters that I think you wrote really well.
Oh, and I had Honey Bunches of Oats for breakfast. :)
So normally I don't review every chapter of a fic unless the story is ongoing, but your request for reviews and talking totally enticed me, so I'm going to write something after every chapter. So yeah. :)
Anywho, your idea behind this fic is totally brilliant! Its really cool that you thought that Brennan might already know that both her and Booth have feelings for each other and they instead choose to dance around each other 'cause they're afraid of getting hurt. This chapter had some insight into B&B's characters that I think you wrote really well.
Oh, and I had Honey Bunches of Oats for breakfast. :)
2/4/2010 c7 MK
Cheese is a government conspiracy.
I found your story this afternoon and read it in one go. It's a good story. Especially the part where Cullen wins the betting pool. :)
Cheese is a government conspiracy.
I found your story this afternoon and read it in one go. It's a good story. Especially the part where Cullen wins the betting pool. :)
11/26/2009 c7 63SinsofMidnight
I 3 it!
And I don't really read hetero, which should tell you something!
63SinsofMidnightI 3 it!
And I don't really read hetero, which should tell you something!
7/1/2009 c5 9mayakasti
" he wanted more was to protect her heart, to keep it from being bruised or torn, to keep it safe, to warm it with his own."
this is so Angel's to Buffy line ! Wow
9mayakasti" he wanted more was to protect her heart, to keep it from being bruised or torn, to keep it safe, to warm it with his own."
this is so Angel's to Buffy line ! Wow
3/31/2009 c5 MISSYPern
I think this is one of the first stories I have read of yours, and boy I will continue. Loved this and I am only up to chapter 5.
Can't read anymore tonight, sadly. School tomorrow.
But well done, amazing :)
Keep up the good work!
I think this is one of the first stories I have read of yours, and boy I will continue. Loved this and I am only up to chapter 5.
Can't read anymore tonight, sadly. School tomorrow.
But well done, amazing :)
Keep up the good work!
1/1/2009 c7 10I Speak Sarcasm
I clicked on your profile after you reviewed my story and saw the set-up for this, and had to read. Totally loved it.
10I Speak SarcasmI clicked on your profile after you reviewed my story and saw the set-up for this, and had to read. Totally loved it.
12/5/2008 c7 Jellicoe
Read it all in one sitting and loved it. Particularly liked the list each of them wrote - very revealing! Keep up the good work.
Read it all in one sitting and loved it. Particularly liked the list each of them wrote - very revealing! Keep up the good work.
11/21/2008 c7 12029823727361
I love her. It’s as plain as that. My heart is hers, I just hope one day she realizes it and lets me take care of hers. It is yours, Booth. My heart was yours a long time ago.
WOW.
WOW.
WOW.
still loving it.
TeeHee
I love her. It’s as plain as that. My heart is hers, I just hope one day she realizes it and lets me take care of hers. It is yours, Booth. My heart was yours a long time ago.
WOW.
WOW.
WOW.
still loving it.
TeeHee
11/21/2008 c6 12029823727361
“I’m still here, just the Doctor side is on vacation for a bit, maybe she can schedule you in for a through examination let’s say, tonight?" Does she have any Idea what she does to me when she talks like this.
"How about we go back to the bedroom, now, you do your examination, and I do my interrogation?”
TeeHee.
still lovin it. xD
“I’m still here, just the Doctor side is on vacation for a bit, maybe she can schedule you in for a through examination let’s say, tonight?" Does she have any Idea what she does to me when she talks like this.
"How about we go back to the bedroom, now, you do your examination, and I do my interrogation?”
TeeHee.
still lovin it. xD