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9/8/2016 c1 2TheFriendlySpirit
It was really good... You understand Naruto very well. PM me?
7/11/2008 c1 ParfaitKiwi
I don't want Naruto. But I liked it anyway...it just sounded like a normal lonley kid = )...which is good
7/11/2008 c1 Kerry Cortez
Hey i actually liked that, cause its true, no atter what they did to him, he would always vow to follow his path and that path was to protect them all with his ailities even if they hated him. keep them coming, loved this story. Although, slow it down a bit, it felt a little to fast for me, as well as add a bit of a personal touch to him. Sure it was good, but it sounded as hough it was just said. But nothing of what happened or who he was saying it to or why. Still a good story and sorry if it seems mean what i said, im not flaming, just trying o get you back into your grooe, ya know! Still it was good and well writen.

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