for Neon Genesis Evangelion: Red Moon Rising9/8/2023 c24 TNO
The fic is okay despite some flaws (mostly super-Shinji in later parts, and very one-dimensional Asuka/Misato).
And of course there is a question. Do they really deserve a happy ending after committing a planet-wide genocide?
The fic is okay despite some flaws (mostly super-Shinji in later parts, and very one-dimensional Asuka/Misato).
And of course there is a question. Do they really deserve a happy ending after committing a planet-wide genocide?
9/8/2023 c17 TNO
Please, stop making A/N notes inside the story. This is very iritating, and makes the fic look bad.
Please, stop making A/N notes inside the story. This is very iritating, and makes the fic look bad.
9/7/2023 c13 TNO
Seriously?
There is Angel nearby, able to attack at any moment, and they are fighting damaging (potentially destroying) Evas.
Are they total morons?
Seriously?
There is Angel nearby, able to attack at any moment, and they are fighting damaging (potentially destroying) Evas.
Are they total morons?
9/7/2023 c11 TNO
I agree that Asuka in the show is unlikable, but here you are describing her as a one dimensional bitch.
Also, clairvoyant-Shinji is a bit irritating.
I agree that Asuka in the show is unlikable, but here you are describing her as a one dimensional bitch.
Also, clairvoyant-Shinji is a bit irritating.
9/7/2023 c10 TNO
No way Gendo Ikari would buy such bullshit excuse for moving Shinji (or allow him near Rei considering what he knows).
No way Gendo Ikari would buy such bullshit excuse for moving Shinji (or allow him near Rei considering what he knows).
9/7/2023 c9 TNO
Shinji screwed, plain and simple.
But him able to keep a box somewhere in the plugsuit (which is skin-tight) is hard to believe (even if we ignore the fact why he even has it inside plugsuit/entry plug).
Shinji screwed, plain and simple.
But him able to keep a box somewhere in the plugsuit (which is skin-tight) is hard to believe (even if we ignore the fact why he even has it inside plugsuit/entry plug).
9/7/2023 c8 TNO
Well, to get a “viewing fee” from both Asuka and Rei. Should he consider himself lucky or unlucky here?
Well, to get a “viewing fee” from both Asuka and Rei. Should he consider himself lucky or unlucky here?
9/7/2023 c4 TNO
Interesting.
I also wondered would happen if Rei snaps. After all, you can't bottle emotions forever.
Interesting.
I also wondered would happen if Rei snaps. After all, you can't bottle emotions forever.
9/7/2023 c1 TNO
Let's hope that will not be an “amazing Shinji” story.
Because for now, everything looks like it.
Let's hope that will not be an “amazing Shinji” story.
Because for now, everything looks like it.
25/7/2022 c24 jonk
how in the ever-loving fuck did that go from 'Shinji you have Asperger's and you put up a mask to separate from others" to that fucking red moon ceremony that starts and ends feel like 2 completely different stories mixed into 1, what you did to Misato and Asuka was disappointing at the least, it's very obvious you don't like them and stripped down their characters to the point where each life YouTubers would be proud. like many fics, the start was amazingly written but got worse over time. honest;y the most i can give to this story is a 5/10, the start was a 9/10, i just want to know how you butchered Misato's character so badly
how in the ever-loving fuck did that go from 'Shinji you have Asperger's and you put up a mask to separate from others" to that fucking red moon ceremony that starts and ends feel like 2 completely different stories mixed into 1, what you did to Misato and Asuka was disappointing at the least, it's very obvious you don't like them and stripped down their characters to the point where each life YouTubers would be proud. like many fics, the start was amazingly written but got worse over time. honest;y the most i can give to this story is a 5/10, the start was a 9/10, i just want to know how you butchered Misato's character so badly