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8/4/2008 c2 5Hyper Blood Pixie
Good job
8/4/2008 c2 16Hallows07
So far your fic is good. However, there are a few mistakes with puncuation. Other than that well done, although i think the settings need more description. Keep updating though and i'll keep reading, bye x.

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