for Mea Culpa7/22/2009 c8 
10math music reading
This is so good! I really love what you've done with Vidanric. He's still in character but you've added more to him and developed his character. I'm so glad you updated and can't wait for the next chapter. Please update again soon!
10math music readingThis is so good! I really love what you've done with Vidanric. He's still in character but you've added more to him and developed his character. I'm so glad you updated and can't wait for the next chapter. Please update again soon!
7/6/2009 c8 1merryabandon
I love that you're writing Crown Duel from Vidanric's point of View, though I have to say that I would be a bit more interested to read the Court Duel part! ;D Therefore, I think you should go through with writing the Court Duel version even if you don't complete this one. However, I really want you to finish Crown Duel from his POV too-it's so intriguing! :D
1merryabandonI love that you're writing Crown Duel from Vidanric's point of View, though I have to say that I would be a bit more interested to read the Court Duel part! ;D Therefore, I think you should go through with writing the Court Duel version even if you don't complete this one. However, I really want you to finish Crown Duel from his POV too-it's so intriguing! :D
7/4/2009 c8 Alaizabel Cray
I think it would be best if you either do the whole story from his point of veiw or just the times when vidanric and mel sme how interact or his reactions to events that she is involved in. Which ever one gives you the most motivation to update. I love your story by the way!
-Aza
I think it would be best if you either do the whole story from his point of veiw or just the times when vidanric and mel sme how interact or his reactions to events that she is involved in. Which ever one gives you the most motivation to update. I love your story by the way!
-Aza
7/4/2009 c8 12sssweetie
I like this story a lot so I hope you will continue it. Either of the options of one shots between mel and vidanric or the plot for when they aren't around one another sound good.
Personally I think even if you do abandon this one, you should still do court duel in vidanric's point of view. It would be very interesting.
12sssweetieI like this story a lot so I hope you will continue it. Either of the options of one shots between mel and vidanric or the plot for when they aren't around one another sound good.
Personally I think even if you do abandon this one, you should still do court duel in vidanric's point of view. It would be very interesting.
7/4/2009 c8 5missax
awesome. I really hope you keep up the good work and don't give up this story. This is the first time I've read Danric's POV from this scene =) nicely done, though i have to ask when the scene where he changes her bandages is coming?
5missaxawesome. I really hope you keep up the good work and don't give up this story. This is the first time I've read Danric's POV from this scene =) nicely done, though i have to ask when the scene where he changes her bandages is coming?
7/4/2009 c8 9SableUn
Here's a review. :)
I enjoy this story quite a bit. If you've the dedication to take it full circle, I think you could really have something. Your representation of Vidanric is insightful and promising.
As to continuing this story, I'm inclined to suggest that you write only the parts that they were together, or various important pieces that he did alone. This is because it would be easy for the story to drag on if we went through and spelled out all the times he was not in Mel's company or doing something for her or about her. I think it would be the best way to keep the story interesting, catching, and flowing.
I hope to see more chapters of this story. You've done a superb job so far.
~Sable Miyako
9SableUnHere's a review. :)
I enjoy this story quite a bit. If you've the dedication to take it full circle, I think you could really have something. Your representation of Vidanric is insightful and promising.
As to continuing this story, I'm inclined to suggest that you write only the parts that they were together, or various important pieces that he did alone. This is because it would be easy for the story to drag on if we went through and spelled out all the times he was not in Mel's company or doing something for her or about her. I think it would be the best way to keep the story interesting, catching, and flowing.
I hope to see more chapters of this story. You've done a superb job so far.
~Sable Miyako
6/21/2009 c7 8Anenihan
Now I feel jipped. I was going along having a fine time reading and then.. BAM! not one but two useless author notes. I hope that second one is implying that you well soon be starting this story up again, otherwise it was very rude to remind everyone of a forgotten story. Might as well have left it in the dust along the road then.
THAT being said, I did really like the story. I just finished re-reading (for like the 50th time)crown duel, and a few fanfic ideas had occured to me. Vandrics POV being one of them. I had never bothered to see if there were in fics for this book before so when I looked it up and not only found some but found THIS one (it was the first in the list being more recently updated...if you call that AN updating) I was super excited.
As the fic goes, I think it's pretty good. You're a good writer (big relief to me) and you've done well keeping with the story. I don't think I'd want to tackle Danric's POV becuase we see so little behind his mask that it could be risky. I see some faults in his character but for the most part its going good. (I always hate when a writer has a character think 'what am I thinking' it's annoying to me, like you couldn't come up with anything else to show the characters internal stuggle) But that aside, very good. Please do go and find your book, or go buy another (I did that, turns out I have like three copies of this book now. Want one? haha) so that you can go on with the fic.
Hehe... what a nice (sort of) long review for you. =meow=
8AnenihanNow I feel jipped. I was going along having a fine time reading and then.. BAM! not one but two useless author notes. I hope that second one is implying that you well soon be starting this story up again, otherwise it was very rude to remind everyone of a forgotten story. Might as well have left it in the dust along the road then.
THAT being said, I did really like the story. I just finished re-reading (for like the 50th time)crown duel, and a few fanfic ideas had occured to me. Vandrics POV being one of them. I had never bothered to see if there were in fics for this book before so when I looked it up and not only found some but found THIS one (it was the first in the list being more recently updated...if you call that AN updating) I was super excited.
As the fic goes, I think it's pretty good. You're a good writer (big relief to me) and you've done well keeping with the story. I don't think I'd want to tackle Danric's POV becuase we see so little behind his mask that it could be risky. I see some faults in his character but for the most part its going good. (I always hate when a writer has a character think 'what am I thinking' it's annoying to me, like you couldn't come up with anything else to show the characters internal stuggle) But that aside, very good. Please do go and find your book, or go buy another (I did that, turns out I have like three copies of this book now. Want one? haha) so that you can go on with the fic.
Hehe... what a nice (sort of) long review for you. =meow=
6/17/2009 c7 siromygod
I look forward to your next update. =) I find summer time is the most prolific for Crown Duel fanfic authors.
I look forward to your next update. =) I find summer time is the most prolific for Crown Duel fanfic authors.
4/10/2009 c5 47zedille
You've really put a lot of detail into covering what, in the book, is not a lot of events.
You seem to have a lot of OCs, which is a bit annoying... but your Vidanric is really well written. I like.
Do you intend to update this? I hope so... *wants to see Vidanric falling in love, tee hee*
47zedilleYou've really put a lot of detail into covering what, in the book, is not a lot of events.
You seem to have a lot of OCs, which is a bit annoying... but your Vidanric is really well written. I like.
Do you intend to update this? I hope so... *wants to see Vidanric falling in love, tee hee*
2/3/2009 c1 12Enno Vy
I love the bantering between the two cousins! Especially Russav joking that Vidanric can't survive without his wardrobe!
12Enno VyI love the bantering between the two cousins! Especially Russav joking that Vidanric can't survive without his wardrobe!
12/10/2008 c6 singing4ever11
please please please please write some more! This story is awesome, and I think that you are one of the few who can capture vidanric's character really well. hopefully you'll return to this story as soon as possible.
~singing4ever
please please please please write some more! This story is awesome, and I think that you are one of the few who can capture vidanric's character really well. hopefully you'll return to this story as soon as possible.
~singing4ever
10/5/2008 c6 wolfoftheworld
Please write some more... Please? I really like the way you have set this up, Is it going to get fluffier? Happy Birthday, and I have to let you know that I hate Author Notes too.
Please write some more... Please? I really like the way you have set this up, Is it going to get fluffier? Happy Birthday, and I have to let you know that I hate Author Notes too.