for Mea Culpa9/6/2008 c5 
6Saint Artemis
This is agood story. your keeping him very incharacter i like that please update soon!
6Saint ArtemisThis is agood story. your keeping him very incharacter i like that please update soon!
8/10/2008 c6 4Wisteria-Blossoms
Sphyre COME BACK! Ha Ha No Seriously Come back I miss your story *tears*
4Wisteria-BlossomsSphyre COME BACK! Ha Ha No Seriously Come back I miss your story *tears*
8/10/2008 c1 7Arquenniel
This is a great place to start! You captured everyone's perception of Danric really well (all the carts of clothes and jewelry, lol). Great job!
7ArquennielThis is a great place to start! You captured everyone's perception of Danric really well (all the carts of clothes and jewelry, lol). Great job!
8/6/2008 c5 smallrose
I read the story. ;) And hey, don't yell at me, I only just discovered it! I've been busy... Anyway, it's a great story, so keep up the good work and update soon!
I read the story. ;) And hey, don't yell at me, I only just discovered it! I've been busy... Anyway, it's a great story, so keep up the good work and update soon!
8/2/2008 c6 siromygod
Since I don't know how to respond to your response, I'll just do it here. I'm not much of a writer, well, I have no interest in writing. So that's why I have no fics. That and the fact that I registered last night. =D Have fun on vacation. Happy Birthday! And hope to see new chapters soon.
Since I don't know how to respond to your response, I'll just do it here. I'm not much of a writer, well, I have no interest in writing. So that's why I have no fics. That and the fact that I registered last night. =D Have fun on vacation. Happy Birthday! And hope to see new chapters soon.
7/31/2008 c5 8FelSong
Haha..you took the words outta my mouth! EG and I have gotten at least 50 hits on chapter 15 of GQ but only 3-4 measly reviews! Granted at least 3 of those hits were my own...but still!
I think its been nicely in character except for 2 parts, in my humble opinion. 1) Danric wouldn't have fallen asleep in the middle of battle. But I suppose the temptation for fluff is hard to resist? In any case, his adrenaline would've kept him up and running all night. 2) He shouldn't have played the commander card with Debegri coz he was supposed to be a court fop. Doing otherwise could've tipped his hand - dangerous!
Hope this helps! Please check out PP and GQ if you can. Thanks!
8FelSongHaha..you took the words outta my mouth! EG and I have gotten at least 50 hits on chapter 15 of GQ but only 3-4 measly reviews! Granted at least 3 of those hits were my own...but still!
I think its been nicely in character except for 2 parts, in my humble opinion. 1) Danric wouldn't have fallen asleep in the middle of battle. But I suppose the temptation for fluff is hard to resist? In any case, his adrenaline would've kept him up and running all night. 2) He shouldn't have played the commander card with Debegri coz he was supposed to be a court fop. Doing otherwise could've tipped his hand - dangerous!
Hope this helps! Please check out PP and GQ if you can. Thanks!
7/31/2008 c5 1courtingu
Cute! by the was are you sure you werent imprisoned in a deep dark dungeon because you took a Really long time to updata! you should be ashamed!(j/k) I hope you will continue the fanfiction, it good, interesting, different from the other Danric point of view! Please kepp on going!
1courtinguCute! by the was are you sure you werent imprisoned in a deep dark dungeon because you took a Really long time to updata! you should be ashamed!(j/k) I hope you will continue the fanfiction, it good, interesting, different from the other Danric point of view! Please kepp on going!
7/31/2008 c5 4Wisteria-Blossoms
Aw! How cute! I almost want you to change the story so that they can be together sooner.Maybe I'll do that for my next story or maybe not. We'll see! I love your story Update soon!
4Wisteria-BlossomsAw! How cute! I almost want you to change the story so that they can be together sooner.Maybe I'll do that for my next story or maybe not. We'll see! I love your story Update soon!
7/20/2008 c4 1courtingu
its good please continue soon, and sorry i reviewed so late, still later is better than never! you did a great job! keep it up!
1courtinguits good please continue soon, and sorry i reviewed so late, still later is better than never! you did a great job! keep it up!
7/19/2008 c4 1BrilliantSun
Awesome job! I love Danric and reading things from his point of view. Keep on!
1BrilliantSunAwesome job! I love Danric and reading things from his point of view. Keep on!