for Mea Culpa7/18/2008 c4 
4Wisteria-Blossoms
Oh this like a completely different story well it is but oh you know what I mean! Keep up the great work
4Wisteria-BlossomsOh this like a completely different story well it is but oh you know what I mean! Keep up the great work
7/18/2008 c4 9SableUn
MMkay, great chapter! First off, you're getting really great at portraying Danric. Kudos. :]
Second, to view how many hits, alerts, favorites, and so forth your story has gotten: there's a button on the left side of the Login page, it says Stats. Clicky clicky, and there's the pay. Hope I could help.
Again, great chapter.
~Sable
9SableUnMMkay, great chapter! First off, you're getting really great at portraying Danric. Kudos. :]
Second, to view how many hits, alerts, favorites, and so forth your story has gotten: there's a button on the left side of the Login page, it says Stats. Clicky clicky, and there's the pay. Hope I could help.
Again, great chapter.
~Sable
7/16/2008 c3 8FelSong
I'm afraid you'll have to type every reviewer's name if you want to name them all!
You had a typo - barrel not barell.
And I think you should refrain from inserting your comments in brackets. It jolted me out of the story far too many times. Other than that, I'm looking forward to the next chapter) I'm working on the next chap of Gyspy Queen as we speak..
8FelSongI'm afraid you'll have to type every reviewer's name if you want to name them all!
You had a typo - barrel not barell.
And I think you should refrain from inserting your comments in brackets. It jolted me out of the story far too many times. Other than that, I'm looking forward to the next chapter) I'm working on the next chap of Gyspy Queen as we speak..
7/16/2008 c3 4Wisteria-Blossoms
Argh! I hate cliff hangers and even though we know whats gonna happen, we don't what he was thinking which is why the story is so great. Argh! Update soon! Please! Please! Please!
4Wisteria-BlossomsArgh! I hate cliff hangers and even though we know whats gonna happen, we don't what he was thinking which is why the story is so great. Argh! Update soon! Please! Please! Please!
7/16/2008 c3 1courtingu
hey that was so good i really liked the part at the end though i know what will happen next im still guessing what will happen next great job please updata soon i mean NOW
1courtinguhey that was so good i really liked the part at the end though i know what will happen next im still guessing what will happen next great job please updata soon i mean NOW
7/16/2008 c3 9SableUn
Very nice chapter. I can seea few mistakes, but nothing too eyecatching. I like this Chapter 3 Vidanric. I can accept him being more expressive with his own men, and then of course in his own head. Keep writing!
~Sable M.
9SableUnVery nice chapter. I can seea few mistakes, but nothing too eyecatching. I like this Chapter 3 Vidanric. I can accept him being more expressive with his own men, and then of course in his own head. Keep writing!
~Sable M.
7/15/2008 c2 4Wisteria-Blossoms
No difinately not boring. A good writer can make a usually tidious scene. I enjoyed very much. Update Soon!
4Wisteria-BlossomsNo difinately not boring. A good writer can make a usually tidious scene. I enjoyed very much. Update Soon!
7/15/2008 c2 1courtingu
That was terrific! Though I know what will happen next, its so exiting to read and see what will happen next. Please updata very soon! The fanfic is really good, great jod!
1courtinguThat was terrific! Though I know what will happen next, its so exiting to read and see what will happen next. Please updata very soon! The fanfic is really good, great jod!
7/15/2008 c2 9SableUn
I like it. ^^ I hope you continue. It was a pretty good idea, adn well written. Keep on going!
~Sable Miyako
9SableUnI like it. ^^ I hope you continue. It was a pretty good idea, adn well written. Keep on going!
~Sable Miyako
7/15/2008 c2 8FelSong
I like the story so far! However, you might like to note that Smith never specified - and has avoided specifying - the Astiars' ages. Even so, the best estimate would be mid to late 20s for Bran and early 20s for Mel. Danric would be older than Bran by a couple of years.
Hope you find that useful!
8FelSongI like the story so far! However, you might like to note that Smith never specified - and has avoided specifying - the Astiars' ages. Even so, the best estimate would be mid to late 20s for Bran and early 20s for Mel. Danric would be older than Bran by a couple of years.
Hope you find that useful!
7/14/2008 c1 1courtingu
i think you will do a great job of this fanfiction, you did a great job! please continue soon!
1courtingui think you will do a great job of this fanfiction, you did a great job! please continue soon!
7/13/2008 c1 4Wisteria-Blossoms
I can tell this going to be good. AH! I'm excited! I already love u'r writing style! Please update soon!
4Wisteria-BlossomsI can tell this going to be good. AH! I'm excited! I already love u'r writing style! Please update soon!