for Breathless9/20/2011 c1 
2Rainbowed-Sunned-Spirit
SO SWEET! I loved their creative insults. LOL. You're an awesome author! Good job!
2Rainbowed-Sunned-SpiritSO SWEET! I loved their creative insults. LOL. You're an awesome author! Good job!
8/3/2011 c1 DeathBySugarCube
such a good story and it made my smile and go "awwww, cute" at the end.
You should do a second chapter where Al or pinako come in, because i always find those scenes very funny, and can you imagine ed and winry's reactions? they would be blushing and putting tomatoes to shame and being really funny and loud and really embarrassed! :D
such a good story and it made my smile and go "awwww, cute" at the end.
You should do a second chapter where Al or pinako come in, because i always find those scenes very funny, and can you imagine ed and winry's reactions? they would be blushing and putting tomatoes to shame and being really funny and loud and really embarrassed! :D
3/30/2010 c1 150Poisoned Scarlet
Ek, all of your EdWin oneshots are so cute and fluffy, I shall definately save some of them for the more depressing or boring days ahead of me xD
Keep writing.
Panda.
150Poisoned ScarletEk, all of your EdWin oneshots are so cute and fluffy, I shall definately save some of them for the more depressing or boring days ahead of me xD
Keep writing.
Panda.
1/22/2009 c1 11DutchCherry12
it was freaking AWSOME!
i can't beleave that you wrote that wen you where boredO_o
anyways i faved again
byebye
aichilove
11DutchCherry12it was freaking AWSOME!
i can't beleave that you wrote that wen you where boredO_o
anyways i faved again
byebye
aichilove
10/24/2008 c1 6whooplord
E! -dies from fluff attack-
Ahem. Okay, this was absolutely fantastic. So in character. I can definately see this happening. It was well written. Keep up the good work!
-SheRicoSuave
6whooplordE! -dies from fluff attack-
Ahem. Okay, this was absolutely fantastic. So in character. I can definately see this happening. It was well written. Keep up the good work!
-SheRicoSuave
8/2/2008 c1 51Microsuede Mouse
Fantastic story! I love how that played out... Well-written, thanks for posting! ^^
Mouse
51Microsuede MouseFantastic story! I love how that played out... Well-written, thanks for posting! ^^
Mouse
7/19/2008 c1 14FreyaLin
wow they made out hella bad! that was hott! hahhaha buh anywaise great story btw! the ending was a bit sappy buh its all good ^-^
14FreyaLinwow they made out hella bad! that was hott! hahhaha buh anywaise great story btw! the ending was a bit sappy buh its all good ^-^