8/21/2019 c39 17Lulubelle09
Just found this gem. Omg amazing. I can’t even tell you how much I want to see the Morelli v Steph show down, I’m hoping that one day I’ll get an update and finally have closure
Just found this gem. Omg amazing. I can’t even tell you how much I want to see the Morelli v Steph show down, I’m hoping that one day I’ll get an update and finally have closure
8/13/2019 c39 Selnea74
Am I missing the last chapter? I loved loved loved this story, please tell us what happened when they landed in Jersey!
Am I missing the last chapter? I loved loved loved this story, please tell us what happened when they landed in Jersey!
7/23/2019 c39 Donna
Stayce, are you still out there? We've missed you and hope you're ok.
Stayce, are you still out there? We've missed you and hope you're ok.
4/27/2019 c39 KellyGirl
Stayce you've done a brilliant job! Call me greedy. But I want my final chapter. Have to be with Steph as she returns to Trenton. You're a magnificent writer. You give great angst, your humor is wicked, your slow burn smut is to die for, your plots/mysteries are so involved & always right on the money when it comes time to unravel them. Please consider returning w/ an ending/epilogue for this, as well as more epics. I'm sure they're a pain but you do them so well. Again, loved this ride. Hope you're well & hope to see more from you soon. Thanks for this!
Stayce you've done a brilliant job! Call me greedy. But I want my final chapter. Have to be with Steph as she returns to Trenton. You're a magnificent writer. You give great angst, your humor is wicked, your slow burn smut is to die for, your plots/mysteries are so involved & always right on the money when it comes time to unravel them. Please consider returning w/ an ending/epilogue for this, as well as more epics. I'm sure they're a pain but you do them so well. Again, loved this ride. Hope you're well & hope to see more from you soon. Thanks for this!
4/27/2019 c32 KellyGirl
Oh Stayce, I'm both loving & hating this chapter! I'm living it because it was so much fun & you jam-packed so much into it so beautifully. I'm hating it as I know I only have a few more left to read & as of yet I don't know if I'll be left hanging forever or not... Please return to writing these great S&R stories that you do so well!
Oh Stayce, I'm both loving & hating this chapter! I'm living it because it was so much fun & you jam-packed so much into it so beautifully. I'm hating it as I know I only have a few more left to read & as of yet I don't know if I'll be left hanging forever or not... Please return to writing these great S&R stories that you do so well!
4/26/2019 c25 KellyGirl
Oooohhh Stayce you're soooo good...& soooo bad! Again, loved this chapter. Now if I may address your AN regarding Mel7190, I wholeheartedly agree w/ you! Based on what she wrote, she clearly had not been reading/following your whole story. And I for one LOVE your writing, plots, characters, sub-stories, etc. As for unregistered readers, I'll admit that I am one, but not for lack of trying! I'm fairly new to FF & once I found great authors such as yourself, Isabella Cullen, Finance Babe, lisababe, Lily Ghost, dee768nj, Jude Cairnsmom (of This Never Happened), Cinbru, Haleigh.l, mybrowneyes, Magdalync, latetolove, kendallgirl13, polysgirl, momofpickles, jinnu357, lintu68, jags-Jim, Katrin87, Jillian peters, Jenrar, girliegirl1179, elizabethAnne1, ShellSueD, highlandsgirl, ryl, just to name a few, I tried to register. I just had to provide feedback to all of you & your great works! This was to no avail... I tried multiple times, but for whatever reason received no authorization from FF w/in their allotted time. Believe me, I'd love to have the capability to FAV & follow you all. I wouldn't mind the PM capability either. I just have to do some of it the old fashioned way. Please keep using your great talent!
Oooohhh Stayce you're soooo good...& soooo bad! Again, loved this chapter. Now if I may address your AN regarding Mel7190, I wholeheartedly agree w/ you! Based on what she wrote, she clearly had not been reading/following your whole story. And I for one LOVE your writing, plots, characters, sub-stories, etc. As for unregistered readers, I'll admit that I am one, but not for lack of trying! I'm fairly new to FF & once I found great authors such as yourself, Isabella Cullen, Finance Babe, lisababe, Lily Ghost, dee768nj, Jude Cairnsmom (of This Never Happened), Cinbru, Haleigh.l, mybrowneyes, Magdalync, latetolove, kendallgirl13, polysgirl, momofpickles, jinnu357, lintu68, jags-Jim, Katrin87, Jillian peters, Jenrar, girliegirl1179, elizabethAnne1, ShellSueD, highlandsgirl, ryl, just to name a few, I tried to register. I just had to provide feedback to all of you & your great works! This was to no avail... I tried multiple times, but for whatever reason received no authorization from FF w/in their allotted time. Believe me, I'd love to have the capability to FAV & follow you all. I wouldn't mind the PM capability either. I just have to do some of it the old fashioned way. Please keep using your great talent!
4/26/2019 c23 KellyGirl
What a chapter! You packed so much into it & I don't want to give anything away in the reviews, but I just had to mention how good it was. The mystery, action, humor, JE's characters & your original characters all combined to make this so enjoyable. That line 'Of course I was gonna stay with him. Where did he think I was going? After all, he had the car keys.' was absolutely priceless! On a side note, happy belated birthday!
What a chapter! You packed so much into it & I don't want to give anything away in the reviews, but I just had to mention how good it was. The mystery, action, humor, JE's characters & your original characters all combined to make this so enjoyable. That line 'Of course I was gonna stay with him. Where did he think I was going? After all, he had the car keys.' was absolutely priceless! On a side note, happy belated birthday!
4/26/2019 c18 KellyGirl
Your writing just floors me, Stayce! I'm loving this plot with its mystery & romance(s), but the humor in this chapter had me laughing out loud & often...pirate Ranger, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Olympic ice skaterSs& cravings for 'a little Italian!' Here's where I beg you to return to writing these chapter stories that you do so well! Thanks for this, now I'm onto the next chapter.
p.s. Cannot tell you'd been having muse problems!
Your writing just floors me, Stayce! I'm loving this plot with its mystery & romance(s), but the humor in this chapter had me laughing out loud & often...pirate Ranger, Buffy the Vampire Slayer, Olympic ice skaterSs& cravings for 'a little Italian!' Here's where I beg you to return to writing these chapter stories that you do so well! Thanks for this, now I'm onto the next chapter.
p.s. Cannot tell you'd been having muse problems!
4/23/2019 c2 KellyGirl
Forgot to mention how much I loved the bathroom scene!
Forgot to mention how much I loved the bathroom scene!
4/23/2019 c2 KellyGirl
Stayce, I know it's been years, but I hope all is well & that you're still getting/reading reviews. I've got to say I'm loving this. You're writing style, characters, humor, smut, all of it's just spot on & I can't wait to read more. I know this doesn't say complete & I don't usually start something that hasn't been touched in years, but your reviews were so awesome, I just had to do it. Looking forward to the rest of this epic tale. Thanks!
Stayce, I know it's been years, but I hope all is well & that you're still getting/reading reviews. I've got to say I'm loving this. You're writing style, characters, humor, smut, all of it's just spot on & I can't wait to read more. I know this doesn't say complete & I don't usually start something that hasn't been touched in years, but your reviews were so awesome, I just had to do it. Looking forward to the rest of this epic tale. Thanks!
4/23/2019 c39 Bonnie
Darn. No epilogue?!
At least a wrap up of what happened in Jersey.
Doesn't need to be another story.
Maybe Steph using her pointy toed shoes and a couple good knee jerks to a few asswipes?! Darn.
Darn. No epilogue?!
At least a wrap up of what happened in Jersey.
Doesn't need to be another story.
Maybe Steph using her pointy toed shoes and a couple good knee jerks to a few asswipes?! Darn.
4/22/2019 c38 Bonnie
Yes! I knew Joe was undercover and had a feeling, for a professional whatever, Malfitano was way too crude and nasty!
So. Ronald was the bad guy?
He came to bring her home but now... Newspaper article... So not good!
Yes! I knew Joe was undercover and had a feeling, for a professional whatever, Malfitano was way too crude and nasty!
So. Ronald was the bad guy?
He came to bring her home but now... Newspaper article... So not good!
4/22/2019 c37 Bonnie
Too bad she didn't think to as Joe to push the panic button.
She got the button pushed but got caught doing it!
This was a very intense chapter.
They could have killed her with the make believe gun shut but, omg, how she didn't freeze to death is a miracle!
Helen and Ella competing was funny!
So glad Hal was ok!
We need to know more about Joe, Malfitano and Rinauldi.
I'd like to see Mama Abruzzi kick the bucket horribly and painfully!
Too bad she didn't think to as Joe to push the panic button.
She got the button pushed but got caught doing it!
This was a very intense chapter.
They could have killed her with the make believe gun shut but, omg, how she didn't freeze to death is a miracle!
Helen and Ella competing was funny!
So glad Hal was ok!
We need to know more about Joe, Malfitano and Rinauldi.
I'd like to see Mama Abruzzi kick the bucket horribly and painfully!
4/22/2019 c36 Bonnie
Yep! Joe is undercover!
What about Renaldi and Malfitano? Undercover? 1 dirty?
Both dirty?
Wow. I don't think they could have done better in their real honeymoon if they ever have one!
I liked the breakfast scenes.
I like that they discuss things too.
Yep! Joe is undercover!
What about Renaldi and Malfitano? Undercover? 1 dirty?
Both dirty?
Wow. I don't think they could have done better in their real honeymoon if they ever have one!
I liked the breakfast scenes.
I like that they discuss things too.
4/22/2019 c35 Bonnie
That was sexyliscious! I loved it!
That was sexyliscious! I loved it!