for Unknown Dangers7/23/2008 c6 eeb bee loves to read
Great chapter! brotherly love, loving it! poor Jeff he must be really really mad about the whole cell phone thing. let allie tell them wat is actually wrong so he can get better. oh please update soon loving the everyday updates!
Great chapter! brotherly love, loving it! poor Jeff he must be really really mad about the whole cell phone thing. let allie tell them wat is actually wrong so he can get better. oh please update soon loving the everyday updates!
7/23/2008 c6 
1genbo
*Claps loudly*
That was rivading, well done now you got me begging for more!
Thanks for the great present!
Keep writing your great at it!
Poor Scott he has no idea whats about to happen to Al?
Up-date ASAP!
1genbo*Claps loudly*
That was rivading, well done now you got me begging for more!
Thanks for the great present!
Keep writing your great at it!
Poor Scott he has no idea whats about to happen to Al?
Up-date ASAP!
7/23/2008 c6 14lissysue85
Ah poor Allie. Gordon pranking John's girlfriend was funny and I loved his comment about Scott being a mother hen. I hope Alan fesses up about his stomach pain soon so that Dr Virge can make the right diagnosis. It was another great chapter hon. Hope you are feeling better. Keep up the wonderful work
14lissysue85Ah poor Allie. Gordon pranking John's girlfriend was funny and I loved his comment about Scott being a mother hen. I hope Alan fesses up about his stomach pain soon so that Dr Virge can make the right diagnosis. It was another great chapter hon. Hope you are feeling better. Keep up the wonderful work
7/23/2008 c6 1Van York
C'mon Alan! Tell them about the pain in your lower stomach!
mygoodness, that boy never listens (:
greatchapterr.
1Van YorkC'mon Alan! Tell them about the pain in your lower stomach!
mygoodness, that boy never listens (:
greatchapterr.
7/23/2008 c6 3BlueEyedAlchemist
another great chapter.
cant wait til tomorrow
is Scott gonna be in the room with Alan when he gets worse or are all the boys gonna be in the movie room and they hear him?
just askin n throwin that out there ^_^
3BlueEyedAlchemistanother great chapter.
cant wait til tomorrow
is Scott gonna be in the room with Alan when he gets worse or are all the boys gonna be in the movie room and they hear him?
just askin n throwin that out there ^_^
7/23/2008 c5 53Kat12739
OMG- this story is soo good! you have me on the edge of my seat, in a corner, wondering if alan will be OK, soon.
Scotty and Virgil are so sweet and caring in this chapter, and you have portrayed a close bond between the five brothers brilliantly.
I can't wait for the update.
KZ :)
53Kat12739OMG- this story is soo good! you have me on the edge of my seat, in a corner, wondering if alan will be OK, soon.
Scotty and Virgil are so sweet and caring in this chapter, and you have portrayed a close bond between the five brothers brilliantly.
I can't wait for the update.
KZ :)
7/22/2008 c5 10Angel Spirit
I love you...*-* really, I do...I had a long kind of icky day at work today and it was so wonderful to find this updated in my inbox...*-* ((glomps author)) Can I give another 'aw...cute!' at this chapter? Five stars for the brotherly fluff, I dare say that you have a definite knack for it! I'm still admiring how you have Alan trusting Scott to make it all better for him, it's too adorable! I wonder how long it's going to take Virgil to realize that it's not heat exhaustion...hm...? *ponders* And kudo's to your brother for staying home w/u while you're sick...man, it makes me wish *MY* big brother did that for me when I was younger and sick ;p lol! It needs to be tomorrow now, so I can read the next chapter...hehe.
10Angel SpiritI love you...*-* really, I do...I had a long kind of icky day at work today and it was so wonderful to find this updated in my inbox...*-* ((glomps author)) Can I give another 'aw...cute!' at this chapter? Five stars for the brotherly fluff, I dare say that you have a definite knack for it! I'm still admiring how you have Alan trusting Scott to make it all better for him, it's too adorable! I wonder how long it's going to take Virgil to realize that it's not heat exhaustion...hm...? *ponders* And kudo's to your brother for staying home w/u while you're sick...man, it makes me wish *MY* big brother did that for me when I was younger and sick ;p lol! It needs to be tomorrow now, so I can read the next chapter...hehe.
7/22/2008 c5 PleaseReportMeSoICanBeDeleted
I Loved this! They finally discovered that Alan is sick! I would say I hope that Alan would be OK, but I know that he isn't going to be (for at least a while!) Uh... do you think you could update today? I understand if you can't but if you could that would be amazing!
I Loved this! They finally discovered that Alan is sick! I would say I hope that Alan would be OK, but I know that he isn't going to be (for at least a while!) Uh... do you think you could update today? I understand if you can't but if you could that would be amazing!
7/22/2008 c5 15humblefan
Ah! I know Alan's just a little kid, but it's killing me that he doesn't tell his brothers about the pain in his "tummy." Heat exhaustion is such a plausible thing, but poor Virgil is going to feel so bad when he finds out it was something much worse. Although I wish the whole story was already posted, I am loving each chapter and am very impressed with your daily updates. Great job! Keep it up . . . please!
15humblefanAh! I know Alan's just a little kid, but it's killing me that he doesn't tell his brothers about the pain in his "tummy." Heat exhaustion is such a plausible thing, but poor Virgil is going to feel so bad when he finds out it was something much worse. Although I wish the whole story was already posted, I am loving each chapter and am very impressed with your daily updates. Great job! Keep it up . . . please!