for Unknown Dangers7/21/2008 c4 PleaseReportMeSoICanBeDeleted
This chapter was so good! I loved it! Poor Alan though... =( OH WELL! Update soon! =)
This chapter was so good! I loved it! Poor Alan though... =( OH WELL! Update soon! =)
7/21/2008 c4 
14lissysue85
Aah poor Allie. That end bit was so adorable. Guess you are not feeling any better then poor you. Fantastic chapter though. Them choosing the movie was really funny especially Gordon ticking Virge. I'm looking forward to the next chapter but don't over do things or big brother will be after you.
14lissysue85Aah poor Allie. That end bit was so adorable. Guess you are not feeling any better then poor you. Fantastic chapter though. Them choosing the movie was really funny especially Gordon ticking Virge. I'm looking forward to the next chapter but don't over do things or big brother will be after you.
7/21/2008 c4 SherryBird
Alan won't be able to keep his illness a secret for longer and his brothers must notice something's wrong soon. Great chapter :) I really liked it!
Alan won't be able to keep his illness a secret for longer and his brothers must notice something's wrong soon. Great chapter :) I really liked it!
7/21/2008 c4 3BlueEyedAlchemist
lol I like the name of the chap.
Alan broke his arm in your story too. sweet deal lol
can't wait for your your next update. keep up the good work
3BlueEyedAlchemistlol I like the name of the chap.
Alan broke his arm in your story too. sweet deal lol
can't wait for your your next update. keep up the good work
7/21/2008 c4 17thunderincrimson
ALAN YOU MUST TELL YOUR BIG BROTHERS THAT YOU'RE FEELING POORLY! IT'S NO USE HIDING THINGS! YOU'RE SICK AND YOU NEED TREATMENT!
Nice work anyway! I really like it!
17thunderincrimsonALAN YOU MUST TELL YOUR BIG BROTHERS THAT YOU'RE FEELING POORLY! IT'S NO USE HIDING THINGS! YOU'RE SICK AND YOU NEED TREATMENT!
Nice work anyway! I really like it!
7/21/2008 c4 10Digi-Girl101
OMG! LOVE IT! UPDAET ASAP! i hope Alan's better at hiding his tears then me! lol whenever i cry, my eyes stay all red & puffy for like an hour! : P
10Digi-Girl101OMG! LOVE IT! UPDAET ASAP! i hope Alan's better at hiding his tears then me! lol whenever i cry, my eyes stay all red & puffy for like an hour! : P
7/21/2008 c4 1Van York
(:
aw, i was looking forward to them finding out!
but the tickling was a cute idea also!
i'll be waiting, naturally!
1Van York(:
aw, i was looking forward to them finding out!
but the tickling was a cute idea also!
i'll be waiting, naturally!
7/21/2008 c4 ArahsiHasLeft
Yay, anothere chappie! Sorry you're not feelin' to well, hope you get better soon! Ah, all that brotherly love 'n stuff is making me feel all warm and cozy, which is good seeing as it's supposed to be a really cold night where I am! Oh, I can't wait to see what's going to happen to our poor Allie next!
Yay, anothere chappie! Sorry you're not feelin' to well, hope you get better soon! Ah, all that brotherly love 'n stuff is making me feel all warm and cozy, which is good seeing as it's supposed to be a really cold night where I am! Oh, I can't wait to see what's going to happen to our poor Allie next!
7/21/2008 c3 lil' beep
you're building up a fan base with only one and a bit stories! I love the way you change the way you write Alan according to his age.
you're building up a fan base with only one and a bit stories! I love the way you change the way you write Alan according to his age.
7/20/2008 c3 4Lunaretta
Yay, another chapter! Really good as usual... is there anymore I can say? You're torturing poor Alan!
Dew
4LunarettaYay, another chapter! Really good as usual... is there anymore I can say? You're torturing poor Alan!
Dew
7/20/2008 c3 ArahsiHasLeft
Oh wow, I go away for a few days, and this is here when I come back! Yay, just what I needed! And three chapters already! I could die from happiness. I read your first story, which was fantastic, by the way, and when you mentioned that you were going to write this story, ah bliss! And here it is! What incredible writing, you have such talent and skill. Are you writing this as you go? Wow, that's amazing! Wish I could do that. Ah well, I can't wait to see more! Good on you.
Oh wow, I go away for a few days, and this is here when I come back! Yay, just what I needed! And three chapters already! I could die from happiness. I read your first story, which was fantastic, by the way, and when you mentioned that you were going to write this story, ah bliss! And here it is! What incredible writing, you have such talent and skill. Are you writing this as you go? Wow, that's amazing! Wish I could do that. Ah well, I can't wait to see more! Good on you.
7/20/2008 c3 151Fiona12690
I love this story just like I loved your last one. I just hate waiting till the next day for the chapters. Coulf you update twice in one day for me I need more! Please?
-Rogue
151Fiona12690I love this story just like I loved your last one. I just hate waiting till the next day for the chapters. Coulf you update twice in one day for me I need more! Please?
-Rogue
7/20/2008 c3 54Kat12739
*Squeals loudly*
This is so cute and sweet! It makes me feel warm and fuzzy!
love over protective Scott, teasing John, and Alan is soo cute!
I thought Gordon kicking Jeff instead of Scott was priceless, and am wondering how he managed to escape without a punishment from Jeff.
I hope they figure out Alan isn't well soon though.
Please update soon,
KZ
54Kat12739*Squeals loudly*
This is so cute and sweet! It makes me feel warm and fuzzy!
love over protective Scott, teasing John, and Alan is soo cute!
I thought Gordon kicking Jeff instead of Scott was priceless, and am wondering how he managed to escape without a punishment from Jeff.
I hope they figure out Alan isn't well soon though.
Please update soon,
KZ