for Unknown Dangers7/20/2008 c3 
10Angel Spirit
Yay! *glomps author* I nearly fell out of my seat in sheer glee when I saw that this was up and that it had three wonderful chapters...*sighs happily* thank you, you totally made my weekend...^-~v I'm loving the longer chapters too...and all the brotherly fluff going on...LOL! I swear one of my favorite scenes so far was the dinner scene in the very beginning when they were all racing for the table-priceless! I so can't wait for more of this...*sighs happily once more*
10Angel SpiritYay! *glomps author* I nearly fell out of my seat in sheer glee when I saw that this was up and that it had three wonderful chapters...*sighs happily* thank you, you totally made my weekend...^-~v I'm loving the longer chapters too...and all the brotherly fluff going on...LOL! I swear one of my favorite scenes so far was the dinner scene in the very beginning when they were all racing for the table-priceless! I so can't wait for more of this...*sighs happily once more*
7/20/2008 c3 PleaseReportMeSoICanBeDeleted
SO I just found this story (and your other story! and I LOVE them! They are so amazingly awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter!
SO I just found this story (and your other story! and I LOVE them! They are so amazingly awesome and I can't wait for the next chapter!
7/20/2008 c3 72criminally charmed
I love how protective the older brothers are of Alan. It does give a bit of a new spin on how they acted during the movie. To them, Alan represented youth and innocence and they wanted that preserved. To have him be a part of the team, seeing the things that they do, could destroy that.
Poor Alan is feeling worse but like all the Tracys, refuses to give into weakness. Gonna blow up soon, huh? Oh, unintentional bad joke there.
Doing really well, you are spurring the interest of your readers and drawing them in.
Later!
72criminally charmedI love how protective the older brothers are of Alan. It does give a bit of a new spin on how they acted during the movie. To them, Alan represented youth and innocence and they wanted that preserved. To have him be a part of the team, seeing the things that they do, could destroy that.
Poor Alan is feeling worse but like all the Tracys, refuses to give into weakness. Gonna blow up soon, huh? Oh, unintentional bad joke there.
Doing really well, you are spurring the interest of your readers and drawing them in.
Later!
7/20/2008 c3 eeb bee loves to read
great new chapter i forgot to review on ch. 2 but i ttly loved that to. i cant wait to see how his brothers will react to seeing poor Allie sick.
update soon please!
great new chapter i forgot to review on ch. 2 but i ttly loved that to. i cant wait to see how his brothers will react to seeing poor Allie sick.
update soon please!
7/20/2008 c3 3BlueEyedAlchemist
lol CHOCOLATTE! priceless
I was gonna suggest the piggy-back ride. Little Alan is so cute. It would be cute if he allie fell asleep on the way back.
MOVIE SUGGESTION: Gordon pick out like an ocean type movie n Virgil pick out like an action one (ex.batman or sumtin) then they have a 'disagreement' which involessum1 gettin pinned. then have Alan pick one.
just suggestions.
3BlueEyedAlchemistlol CHOCOLATTE! priceless
I was gonna suggest the piggy-back ride. Little Alan is so cute. It would be cute if he allie fell asleep on the way back.
MOVIE SUGGESTION: Gordon pick out like an ocean type movie n Virgil pick out like an action one (ex.batman or sumtin) then they have a 'disagreement' which involessum1 gettin pinned. then have Alan pick one.
just suggestions.
7/20/2008 c3 14lissysue85
Another great chapter. Poor allie. Trust Scott to get them lost and then dny it. Sounds just like my big brother he he. Glad my advice helped. I feel sorry for whoever has to tell Jeff once they find out although i guess it will be Scott as he is the oldest and in charge. Keep up your brilliant work.
14lissysue85Another great chapter. Poor allie. Trust Scott to get them lost and then dny it. Sounds just like my big brother he he. Glad my advice helped. I feel sorry for whoever has to tell Jeff once they find out although i guess it will be Scott as he is the oldest and in charge. Keep up your brilliant work.
7/20/2008 c3 8Lampala
Poor Alan. I can just imagine Scott getting them all lost. Great chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
8LampalaPoor Alan. I can just imagine Scott getting them all lost. Great chapter and I can't wait until the next one.
7/20/2008 c2 Holly
Hi...this story is really good so far...can't wait to read more of it!
Hi...this story is really good so far...can't wait to read more of it!
7/19/2008 c2 3BlueEyedAlchemist
o getting good. I really it it so far.
I can't wait to see what happens when they get tot the beach?
Can't wit for the next update
3BlueEyedAlchemisto getting good. I really it it so far.
I can't wait to see what happens when they get tot the beach?
Can't wit for the next update
7/19/2008 c2 72criminally charmed
oh, I can see the promise of a lot of Tracys blaming themselves. And it was sweet how Alan was trying to make sure his brothers were enjoying themselves. Plus I love the whole "Scotty...Scorpion!". John sure took advantage of that. Blonde, clever and he can cook (OK, it is grilled cheese, but that is better than some people I know).
Nice chapter, just try and watch the typos. It really can snag the reader and pull them away from your story.
72criminally charmedoh, I can see the promise of a lot of Tracys blaming themselves. And it was sweet how Alan was trying to make sure his brothers were enjoying themselves. Plus I love the whole "Scotty...Scorpion!". John sure took advantage of that. Blonde, clever and he can cook (OK, it is grilled cheese, but that is better than some people I know).
Nice chapter, just try and watch the typos. It really can snag the reader and pull them away from your story.
7/19/2008 c2 4Lunaretta
Two words. Poor Alan. Little Alan's so cute! Story's so good! i love it so far and can't wait for more.
Dew
4LunarettaTwo words. Poor Alan. Little Alan's so cute! Story's so good! i love it so far and can't wait for more.
Dew
7/19/2008 c2 1Northern-Child
I haven't reviewed any of your other chapters (this includes your other story) but I really should have. So consider this a review for everything. I really enjoy reading your stories, and am now addicted to this one...
I read your profile.. (i'm not a stalker i promise!) and you're lucky to have siblings.. I'm an only child, so I love reading caring-sibling stories.
Can't wait for your next post and hope you post the next chapter sooner rather than later.
~ Northern Child
1Northern-ChildI haven't reviewed any of your other chapters (this includes your other story) but I really should have. So consider this a review for everything. I really enjoy reading your stories, and am now addicted to this one...
I read your profile.. (i'm not a stalker i promise!) and you're lucky to have siblings.. I'm an only child, so I love reading caring-sibling stories.
Can't wait for your next post and hope you post the next chapter sooner rather than later.
~ Northern Child