for Unknown Dangers7/19/2008 c2 
1genbo
Wow very cool begining, but I can always count on one very amazing story!
I love how cute little Allie is.
Oh Scotts going to flip into full "mother-hun mode" when he finds out Alan sick.
Idea Scott and the guys should find Al laying a sleep at the rock cut with a little fever. Scott should carry Al home and put him to sleep. That night Al should sream out loud in pain and Scott finds him.
Up-date soon ASAP!
1genboWow very cool begining, but I can always count on one very amazing story!
I love how cute little Allie is.
Oh Scotts going to flip into full "mother-hun mode" when he finds out Alan sick.
Idea Scott and the guys should find Al laying a sleep at the rock cut with a little fever. Scott should carry Al home and put him to sleep. That night Al should sream out loud in pain and Scott finds him.
Up-date soon ASAP!
7/19/2008 c2 SherryBird
I truly suck at writing reviews but I'll try anyway:
I enjoyed every word in this chapter, it is wellwritten and funny. I hope though that you don't make the Tracy brothers blind and dumb as Alan's symptoms grow worse. Don't wait until Alan is screaming in pain on the floor for them to realise something is wrong with Alan.
I truly suck at writing reviews but I'll try anyway:
I enjoyed every word in this chapter, it is wellwritten and funny. I hope though that you don't make the Tracy brothers blind and dumb as Alan's symptoms grow worse. Don't wait until Alan is screaming in pain on the floor for them to realise something is wrong with Alan.
7/19/2008 c2 8Lampala
Love it so far! Even though I don't normally like movieverse ones, I loved your other fic and this one. It was so funny when John was calling Scott 'fatty'. They are so childish! Can't wait till tomorrow for the next chapter.
8LampalaLove it so far! Even though I don't normally like movieverse ones, I loved your other fic and this one. It was so funny when John was calling Scott 'fatty'. They are so childish! Can't wait till tomorrow for the next chapter.
7/19/2008 c2 10Digi-Girl101
OMG! LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! aww poor Alan!
lmfaoo his brothers DO act like children though .. lol : P
10Digi-Girl101OMG! LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! aww poor Alan!
lmfaoo his brothers DO act like children though .. lol : P
7/19/2008 c2 14lissysue85
Another chapter already. You rock. I loved it. Alan is so sweet and the others are great too. You can already see Dr Virge coming through. Poor Alan I don't think walking will help him too much. Bless Gordon and John for saving Alan. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love ya.
14lissysue85Another chapter already. You rock. I loved it. Alan is so sweet and the others are great too. You can already see Dr Virge coming through. Poor Alan I don't think walking will help him too much. Bless Gordon and John for saving Alan. Can't wait for the next chapter. Love ya.
7/19/2008 c1 27princessezzy
Yay another story! aw your Alan is just too cute, loved how everyone feels obliged to 'gently shove him around' in fact all your baby Tracys are cute, yes even Scott! it was a really good opening chapter and i can't wait for the next XD
27princessezzyYay another story! aw your Alan is just too cute, loved how everyone feels obliged to 'gently shove him around' in fact all your baby Tracys are cute, yes even Scott! it was a really good opening chapter and i can't wait for the next XD
7/19/2008 c1 1Van York
another grreat brotherly-love happening(:
I'm super excited!
just the perfect birthday gift!
update daily?
hopefully!
oh, and its great how you are able to exit Fermat from the story so nicely, without seeming like you're kicking him out!
1Van Yorkanother grreat brotherly-love happening(:
I'm super excited!
just the perfect birthday gift!
update daily?
hopefully!
oh, and its great how you are able to exit Fermat from the story so nicely, without seeming like you're kicking him out!
7/19/2008 c1 75cathrl
Since the plot hasn't really started yet, I can't get much beyond "so far, so good".
I mostly reviewed at this point to comment on your final author's note. Please, please, don't even TRY to write and post daily chapters - or even weekly ones. You simply won't do yourself justice. Take your time. Post them when you have had time to write them as well as you can, and to edit them, and they are ready for an audience. There is plenty of other fanfic here for me to read - I'd much rather see good updates than frequent ones.
75cathrlSince the plot hasn't really started yet, I can't get much beyond "so far, so good".
I mostly reviewed at this point to comment on your final author's note. Please, please, don't even TRY to write and post daily chapters - or even weekly ones. You simply won't do yourself justice. Take your time. Post them when you have had time to write them as well as you can, and to edit them, and they are ready for an audience. There is plenty of other fanfic here for me to read - I'd much rather see good updates than frequent ones.
7/19/2008 c1 Musette12
I really enjoy your writing and the stories you have posted here.
Keep up the good work!
Well written, keen characterisations and family-focused storylines add up to a winning formula.
I really enjoy your writing and the stories you have posted here.
Keep up the good work!
Well written, keen characterisations and family-focused storylines add up to a winning formula.
7/19/2008 c1 14lissysue85
Yay you're back and what a great opening. It was so funny. I loved John's fatty comment to Scott. The ending bit was good too with Jeff tucking his son in. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work.
14lissysue85Yay you're back and what a great opening. It was so funny. I loved John's fatty comment to Scott. The ending bit was good too with Jeff tucking his son in. Can't wait for the next chapter. Keep up the fantastic work.
7/18/2008 c1 SherryBird
I'm so glad about this story! I especially like the fights and arguments between the Tracy brothers. To hear John call Scott "Fatty" almost killed me ha ha ha! Looking forward to next chapter!
I'm so glad about this story! I especially like the fights and arguments between the Tracy brothers. To hear John call Scott "Fatty" almost killed me ha ha ha! Looking forward to next chapter!
7/18/2008 c1 Guest
If this story is anything like another i read of yours i know it will be good.
Can't wait until the next chapter is up
:D
If this story is anything like another i read of yours i know it will be good.
Can't wait until the next chapter is up
:D
7/18/2008 c1 3cavetrollgrl
Loved it all those rambunctous boys fooling around but still loving each other. Nice idea to have backgrounded this idea in your Smothered story
3cavetrollgrlLoved it all those rambunctous boys fooling around but still loving each other. Nice idea to have backgrounded this idea in your Smothered story