for Unknown Dangers8/1/2008 c15 
14lissysue85
Wow what a brilliant ending. Alan was so sweet. I really loved this story and you are a brilliant writer. If you carry on like this and I will defintly read your stories. The scene on the plane was really funny and I love Virgeon the Surgeon. That was brill. You have really caught the closeness between the brothers and their dad. I love ya and your stories.
14lissysue85Wow what a brilliant ending. Alan was so sweet. I really loved this story and you are a brilliant writer. If you carry on like this and I will defintly read your stories. The scene on the plane was really funny and I love Virgeon the Surgeon. That was brill. You have really caught the closeness between the brothers and their dad. I love ya and your stories.
8/1/2008 c14 54Kat12739
Wow- you update really fast! I just read your previous chapter last night, and when I woke up this morning, there was an update.
Anyway, just like the brothers, I really want to know why Jeff was decking another person when Tom got in the way.
Also, I loved the scene between Scott, John and Virgil. So fluffy and sweet!
Gordo's threat about Tracy One made me laugh so much. It was a stroke of genius.
KZ ;)
54Kat12739Wow- you update really fast! I just read your previous chapter last night, and when I woke up this morning, there was an update.
Anyway, just like the brothers, I really want to know why Jeff was decking another person when Tom got in the way.
Also, I loved the scene between Scott, John and Virgil. So fluffy and sweet!
Gordo's threat about Tracy One made me laugh so much. It was a stroke of genius.
KZ ;)
8/1/2008 c15 30Whispering Ranger
Everybody say: Aw!
That was so sweet ^^ Sums up everything quite nicely :D This was a great chapter to read. Heck, it was a great fic to read, not just chapter, and I'm so happy everything's gonna be alright :) I'm so excited for your next fic, and I'm betting it'll be just as good as this one ^^
Take care,
Liz.
30Whispering RangerEverybody say: Aw!
That was so sweet ^^ Sums up everything quite nicely :D This was a great chapter to read. Heck, it was a great fic to read, not just chapter, and I'm so happy everything's gonna be alright :) I'm so excited for your next fic, and I'm betting it'll be just as good as this one ^^
Take care,
Liz.
8/1/2008 c14 3BlueEyedAlchemist
aww I love Virgil/Alan stories
lol You saved Virgil from another tickle fight.
Are you gonna write a fanfic about old times with Jeff n Tom? Just asking
YAY YOUR GONNA UPDATE LATER!
Another story almost completed
3BlueEyedAlchemistaww I love Virgil/Alan stories
lol You saved Virgil from another tickle fight.
Are you gonna write a fanfic about old times with Jeff n Tom? Just asking
YAY YOUR GONNA UPDATE LATER!
Another story almost completed
8/1/2008 c14 37black4minister
yeah! new chapter this evening *gives hug*, thanks so much!can't wait anyway. this was another brillent chapter, brotherly love-you gotta love it. i hope you're putting in some of those stories from the space station in, they sound hilarious. til this evening, bye!
37black4ministeryeah! new chapter this evening *gives hug*, thanks so much!can't wait anyway. this was another brillent chapter, brotherly love-you gotta love it. i hope you're putting in some of those stories from the space station in, they sound hilarious. til this evening, bye!
8/1/2008 c14 SherryBird
Happy that you got rid of Rivers but is still wondering how the family would react to the headlines about Alan's sickness? Sad about next chapter being the last one but hope that you got more stories to write!
Happy that you got rid of Rivers but is still wondering how the family would react to the headlines about Alan's sickness? Sad about next chapter being the last one but hope that you got more stories to write!
8/1/2008 c14 8Lampala
Oh, the next chapter's the last one. That's annoying. I really like this story. Can't wait till Alan returns home. Can you tell us the story of when Jeff punched Tom? I wanna know about that. Can't wait till the next chapter!
8LampalaOh, the next chapter's the last one. That's annoying. I really like this story. Can't wait till Alan returns home. Can you tell us the story of when Jeff punched Tom? I wanna know about that. Can't wait till the next chapter!
8/1/2008 c14 17thunderincrimson
Gosh I love this fic! Big brothers worried about baby brother! OW
can't wait for the last chapter and to read your next story!
17thunderincrimsonGosh I love this fic! Big brothers worried about baby brother! OW
can't wait for the last chapter and to read your next story!
8/1/2008 c14 14lissysue85
That was a great chapter mate. Gordon was so cheeky about John. Bless Alan even when he was being grumpy you cant help but love him. Virgil was so sweet bringing the teddy and talking to Al. I love the funny moments between Jeff and Tom too. I cant believe its nearly final chapter time. Its so sad. love ya
14lissysue85That was a great chapter mate. Gordon was so cheeky about John. Bless Alan even when he was being grumpy you cant help but love him. Virgil was so sweet bringing the teddy and talking to Al. I love the funny moments between Jeff and Tom too. I cant believe its nearly final chapter time. Its so sad. love ya
8/1/2008 c14 151Fiona12690
OH I LOVE YOU! This was the best chapter out of all of them and I can't wait till you put up the last chapter tonight. I love the Gordon/Alan moment that was really funny. I just love it and I loved when Virgil sang to Alan. The whole Scott and John thing was beutiful at the end with Virgil aw. I also can't wait for that Gordon/Alan story either. How old are they going to be in that story?
-Rogue
151Fiona12690OH I LOVE YOU! This was the best chapter out of all of them and I can't wait till you put up the last chapter tonight. I love the Gordon/Alan moment that was really funny. I just love it and I loved when Virgil sang to Alan. The whole Scott and John thing was beutiful at the end with Virgil aw. I also can't wait for that Gordon/Alan story either. How old are they going to be in that story?
-Rogue
8/1/2008 c14 19narutosfangurl
AWW! I can't believe there's only one more chapter to go! It's such a sweet story too! (sigh) Oh well, I guess even the good things have to end eventually!
So yeah, this chapter definitely brings back some memories! I remember yelling at the nurse though! It was after visiting hours, I was bored, and trying to deny that I was indeed tired. Eventually, though, the nurse won. (Although she cheated and sedated me. Dirty tick to pull on an 11 year old if you ask me!) Very good, loved all the brotherly fluff and I also want to hear about Jeff's right hook! Sounds fascinating!
Can't wait till the last chapter!
NFG
19narutosfangurlAWW! I can't believe there's only one more chapter to go! It's such a sweet story too! (sigh) Oh well, I guess even the good things have to end eventually!
So yeah, this chapter definitely brings back some memories! I remember yelling at the nurse though! It was after visiting hours, I was bored, and trying to deny that I was indeed tired. Eventually, though, the nurse won. (Although she cheated and sedated me. Dirty tick to pull on an 11 year old if you ask me!) Very good, loved all the brotherly fluff and I also want to hear about Jeff's right hook! Sounds fascinating!
Can't wait till the last chapter!
NFG
8/1/2008 c14 30Whispering Ranger
*squeals* Aw! :D That was so sweet! ^^ Poor Gordy, the first victim of cranky Alan x)
And when Alan was going to sleep... my heart just swelled. That was so sweet and made me so happy :)
The end was funny *chuckles* I can't wait to find out what Jeff and Tom will tell them, if they tell them something *grins* Will Gordon find out that Virgil blamed himself?
Anyway, it's so sad there's only one chapter left *cries* You have to write more! :D
30Whispering Ranger*squeals* Aw! :D That was so sweet! ^^ Poor Gordy, the first victim of cranky Alan x)
And when Alan was going to sleep... my heart just swelled. That was so sweet and made me so happy :)
The end was funny *chuckles* I can't wait to find out what Jeff and Tom will tell them, if they tell them something *grins* Will Gordon find out that Virgil blamed himself?
Anyway, it's so sad there's only one chapter left *cries* You have to write more! :D