for Unknown Dangers8/1/2008 c13 
54Kat12739
Go Scotty! Rivers deserved that right hook, and the police escort out of the hospital. Can't wait to see Jeff's reaction though.
I wasn't disappointed with this chapter, by the way; I loved it. Good to see that Scott and Virgil sorted things out.
Please update soon
KZ ;)
54Kat12739Go Scotty! Rivers deserved that right hook, and the police escort out of the hospital. Can't wait to see Jeff's reaction though.
I wasn't disappointed with this chapter, by the way; I loved it. Good to see that Scott and Virgil sorted things out.
Please update soon
KZ ;)
7/31/2008 c13 3cavetrollgrl
Great chapter especially knocking sence into virgil and the reporter. And it was obnoxiuos reporter surely jeff can't get too mad. A drugged up alan was so cute
3cavetrollgrlGreat chapter especially knocking sence into virgil and the reporter. And it was obnoxiuos reporter surely jeff can't get too mad. A drugged up alan was so cute
7/31/2008 c13 72criminally charmed
AW! Alan was so sweet when he is asleep.
Too bad he'll have to wake up.
Wonder when the media will -or if - that Jeff has been there all along. More importantly, what will Jeff's reaction be to the brawl?
Snicker - guy got arrested. Ha-ha.
72criminally charmedAW! Alan was so sweet when he is asleep.
Too bad he'll have to wake up.
Wonder when the media will -or if - that Jeff has been there all along. More importantly, what will Jeff's reaction be to the brawl?
Snicker - guy got arrested. Ha-ha.
7/31/2008 c13 10Digi-Girl101
OMG! LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! aww poor Scotty! He didn't get to kill Rivers! : (
10Digi-Girl101OMG! LOVE IT! UPDATE ASAP! aww poor Scotty! He didn't get to kill Rivers! : (
7/31/2008 c13 151Fiona12690
Great chapter my friend, But don't do it. Don't have Alan be mad at Virgil. I really don't think Virgil could take anymore. I think we should bring in Gordon and John more. He should be mad at Gordon or John and only Virgil can calm him down. I can't wait for the next chapter you are doing great! I'm a beta reader myself but I was wondering if you would help me and give me some ideas about a new Thunderbirds story i'm writing.
-Rogue
151Fiona12690Great chapter my friend, But don't do it. Don't have Alan be mad at Virgil. I really don't think Virgil could take anymore. I think we should bring in Gordon and John more. He should be mad at Gordon or John and only Virgil can calm him down. I can't wait for the next chapter you are doing great! I'm a beta reader myself but I was wondering if you would help me and give me some ideas about a new Thunderbirds story i'm writing.
-Rogue
7/31/2008 c13 20themusicain
nice! i'm liking how this is going, and i definitely enjoyed the punch-up (a little comic relief after the fluffy angst. don't get me wrong. i'm loving all of it, it's just nice to get a break)
20themusicainnice! i'm liking how this is going, and i definitely enjoyed the punch-up (a little comic relief after the fluffy angst. don't get me wrong. i'm loving all of it, it's just nice to get a break)
7/31/2008 c13 37black4minister
i think it wqas perfect that rivers got arrested, slimey little git. can't wait to see jeff's reaction to scott's bruised jaw. he'll probably be real concered until he finds out how he got it. and cranky alan, always hard to deal with, but what could virgil get him that would help? update soon!
37black4ministeri think it wqas perfect that rivers got arrested, slimey little git. can't wait to see jeff's reaction to scott's bruised jaw. he'll probably be real concered until he finds out how he got it. and cranky alan, always hard to deal with, but what could virgil get him that would help? update soon!
7/31/2008 c13 SherryBird
Unbelivable! The nerve Rivers has! Kepp updating and please tell me this isn't your last fanfic :)
Unbelivable! The nerve Rivers has! Kepp updating and please tell me this isn't your last fanfic :)
7/31/2008 c13 3BlueEyedAlchemist
Does Virgil bring..'coco' i think, its his lil bear?
YES RIVERS GOES DOWN!
When Scott hit him I was like YES! lol.
He had it coming.
3BlueEyedAlchemistDoes Virgil bring..'coco' i think, its his lil bear?
YES RIVERS GOES DOWN!
When Scott hit him I was like YES! lol.
He had it coming.
7/31/2008 c13 1Van York
goodness! I bet Scott's fist could do a lot of damage!
can't wait for more little Alan!
1Van Yorkgoodness! I bet Scott's fist could do a lot of damage!
can't wait for more little Alan!
7/31/2008 c13 14lissysue85
Great chapter as always. Go Scott for decking the guy. He totally deserved it. Scott was so sweet to Virge in this chapter and then funny with the tickling. The end bit was funny too and I can't wait to see what Jeff has to say next. John and Gordon will think Scott did the right thing by socking him but will they find out about Virge?
14lissysue85Great chapter as always. Go Scott for decking the guy. He totally deserved it. Scott was so sweet to Virge in this chapter and then funny with the tickling. The end bit was funny too and I can't wait to see what Jeff has to say next. John and Gordon will think Scott did the right thing by socking him but will they find out about Virge?
7/31/2008 c13 35jonsmom14
Happy dance! Yay for Scotty decking the pervy reporter! This was a fun chapter. I really liked how you handled the scene with Alan waking up; sweet without giving me a toothache.
I'm glad you already have something else lined up, keep'em comin'!
35jonsmom14Happy dance! Yay for Scotty decking the pervy reporter! This was a fun chapter. I really liked how you handled the scene with Alan waking up; sweet without giving me a toothache.
I'm glad you already have something else lined up, keep'em comin'!
7/31/2008 c13 eeb bee loves to read
thanks for the update again... loving the brotherly tracy love. i forgot to review on the last chapter but poor Virg he soo sad but im soo happy that Jeff finally talked to him about it.
this chapter im soo happy that Allie woke up and loving more of the tracy love.
thanks again for the update and cant wait for the next one.
thanks for the update again... loving the brotherly tracy love. i forgot to review on the last chapter but poor Virg he soo sad but im soo happy that Jeff finally talked to him about it.
this chapter im soo happy that Allie woke up and loving more of the tracy love.
thanks again for the update and cant wait for the next one.
7/31/2008 c13 30Whispering Ranger
*laughs* Oh, good ole' Scooter! I ahted that reporter, but now he's gone. Hopefully for good. Yay, Alan woke up! Virgil's back to his own self! Things are *almost* back to normal!
This chapter was great, I wasn't disappointed at all :D I wonder who Alan will snap at first. Humm...
And now I can't wait until tomorrow. Again. It's sad that it's done soon :/ But you'll hopefully write more, soo.. :D
30Whispering Ranger*laughs* Oh, good ole' Scooter! I ahted that reporter, but now he's gone. Hopefully for good. Yay, Alan woke up! Virgil's back to his own self! Things are *almost* back to normal!
This chapter was great, I wasn't disappointed at all :D I wonder who Alan will snap at first. Humm...
And now I can't wait until tomorrow. Again. It's sad that it's done soon :/ But you'll hopefully write more, soo.. :D