for Finding Home9/10/2008 c5 
4JarethsTightPants
A nice developmental chapter. I hope that everything goes a little smoother for her from now on, the poor girl's been through a lot.
4JarethsTightPantsA nice developmental chapter. I hope that everything goes a little smoother for her from now on, the poor girl's been through a lot.
9/9/2008 c6 Cocoa Jamboree
Too cute! I love the pace that Bethany and HB are moving at, steady and much more realistic than some of the other stories out there. Their moments together are so cute. I have a feeling that their relationship will step up in the near future.
Davis seems to be coming along quite nicely. I still hope that she and Bethany will become even closer, seems to me like they'd be good friends in the end. And Glen still needs a good pop in the face. I'm definitely holding out for that one. :) Wonderful work.
Too cute! I love the pace that Bethany and HB are moving at, steady and much more realistic than some of the other stories out there. Their moments together are so cute. I have a feeling that their relationship will step up in the near future.
Davis seems to be coming along quite nicely. I still hope that she and Bethany will become even closer, seems to me like they'd be good friends in the end. And Glen still needs a good pop in the face. I'm definitely holding out for that one. :) Wonderful work.
9/3/2008 c5 1BlueEyedGunSlinger
AW!
What a great end to the chapter! This story is fantastic! I love Your character Bethany, she's very unique. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next!
1BlueEyedGunSlingerAW!
What a great end to the chapter! This story is fantastic! I love Your character Bethany, she's very unique. Anyway, I can't wait to see what happens next!
8/25/2008 c5 4misskatiefrank
I love this story :D
The relationship between HB and Bethany is so sweet.
Can't wait for more!
4misskatiefrankI love this story :D
The relationship between HB and Bethany is so sweet.
Can't wait for more!
8/22/2008 c5 Cocoa Jamboree
Too cute for words. Man, Glen is such a jerkface. I was really hoping Bethany would slap him in his stupid mouth. I'm glad she and HB are progressing in the relationship area. :) Oh, and I hope Bethany and Davis can reconcile or something. Davis seems to be coming around a bit.
Hmm, sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter, it was a good one too. My computer must have been acting up. When that happens I just turn the stupid thing off. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter!
Too cute for words. Man, Glen is such a jerkface. I was really hoping Bethany would slap him in his stupid mouth. I'm glad she and HB are progressing in the relationship area. :) Oh, and I hope Bethany and Davis can reconcile or something. Davis seems to be coming around a bit.
Hmm, sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter, it was a good one too. My computer must have been acting up. When that happens I just turn the stupid thing off. ;) Looking forward to the next chapter!
8/7/2008 c3 Cocoa Jamboree
Haha, big red ass. I'm wondering though, HB said that he was only able to get three of the dragons in time, does that mean the fourth one woke up but he still killed it? Or the fourth one got away? I'm probably over analyzing it a bit. Great chapter!
Haha, big red ass. I'm wondering though, HB said that he was only able to get three of the dragons in time, does that mean the fourth one woke up but he still killed it? Or the fourth one got away? I'm probably over analyzing it a bit. Great chapter!
8/7/2008 c3 transientday
Owie, long gashes along the arm? I know what it's like to get badly scratched up...
Cute! HB's been turned into a big red security blanket!
Very well done! Keep writing please.
Owie, long gashes along the arm? I know what it's like to get badly scratched up...
Cute! HB's been turned into a big red security blanket!
Very well done! Keep writing please.
7/26/2008 c2 Cocoa Jamboree
Very interesting so far. I like Bethany and her PK abilities. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
Very interesting so far. I like Bethany and her PK abilities. Looking forward to the next chapter. ;)
7/26/2008 c2 4JarethsTightPants
Ha ha, I can't wait to see he face down six dragons as her first mission. Talk about jumping into the deep end to learn how to swim.
4JarethsTightPantsHa ha, I can't wait to see he face down six dragons as her first mission. Talk about jumping into the deep end to learn how to swim.
7/24/2008 c1 JarethsTightPants
Great chapter, although the whole being roped into the BPRD with no choice didn't sit well with me. all in all she seems like a great addition to the team. Can't wait to read more.
Great chapter, although the whole being roped into the BPRD with no choice didn't sit well with me. all in all she seems like a great addition to the team. Can't wait to read more.
7/18/2008 c1 29SarcasticEnigma
i already really like bethany! her relationships with abe and broom are great, almost family like (father/daughter or brother/sister or whatever) and i really enjoyed the interaction with hellboy. you got him (and the others) down wonderfully. great job! as for the time set, i'm curious. is this before, or in an AU version during the movie? the myers being there and liz permanently in the asylum thing kinda threw me off. very curious as to where this is going, if they'll be any romance (cuz HB fics usually, if not always, have some kind of romance somewhere), if you'll go into the 2nd movie, etc. etc. UPDATE SOON!
29SarcasticEnigmai already really like bethany! her relationships with abe and broom are great, almost family like (father/daughter or brother/sister or whatever) and i really enjoyed the interaction with hellboy. you got him (and the others) down wonderfully. great job! as for the time set, i'm curious. is this before, or in an AU version during the movie? the myers being there and liz permanently in the asylum thing kinda threw me off. very curious as to where this is going, if they'll be any romance (cuz HB fics usually, if not always, have some kind of romance somewhere), if you'll go into the 2nd movie, etc. etc. UPDATE SOON!