7/27/2014 c4 Guest
Please write more
Please write more
5/21/2013 c4 abiQuii
That was so funny, and I can honestly say this is the best story ever!, I have never reviewed a story before, urs is the first but its so awsm I just can't ignore it! Love it... Lotza love Abby
That was so funny, and I can honestly say this is the best story ever!, I have never reviewed a story before, urs is the first but its so awsm I just can't ignore it! Love it... Lotza love Abby
4/17/2009 c4 19Eloise Lawrence
I have fallen in love ... with this story!
Its amazing and i truely love it!
You will soo be a famous writer one day!
Ill bet ya! lol :)
Please carry on :)
I have fallen in love ... with this story!
Its amazing and i truely love it!
You will soo be a famous writer one day!
Ill bet ya! lol :)
Please carry on :)
12/27/2008 c4 2geek'd
OMG! -My hand flung out and met with something.
“Ah! God,” the voice went again.
My eyes snapped open. “Oh my god I’m so,” I paused.
Shane stood there, holding his nose.
“Oh, it’s you,”
Anastasia bit! *squeal*
FINALLY! An update! I was ready to give up on this story!
And wth? Toothpaste? Soo random.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Good job!
OMG! -My hand flung out and met with something.
“Ah! God,” the voice went again.
My eyes snapped open. “Oh my god I’m so,” I paused.
Shane stood there, holding his nose.
“Oh, it’s you,”
Anastasia bit! *squeal*
FINALLY! An update! I was ready to give up on this story!
And wth? Toothpaste? Soo random.
I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Good job!
12/27/2008 c4 daylightspeaks
This story is a lot of fun! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the amazing work!
This story is a lot of fun! Looking forward to seeing what happens next! Keep up the amazing work!
12/27/2008 c4 1peaceandsmile
Nate and Caitlyn never met yet in your story, so why would Nate ask Mitchie to ask her out? other then that, i love the story. update soon
Nate and Caitlyn never met yet in your story, so why would Nate ask Mitchie to ask her out? other then that, i love the story. update soon
12/27/2008 c4 10Denell
Awh. Pft.
I love Geek, Popular Guy stories.
Even though they are cliche.
This has been really good so far, I hope
Tess backs off.
Haha. I loved this line.
""Before this, she used to be a nottie," he mumbled low enough for only me to hear. I lightly punched him in the gut."
xD Nice Shane. Get a girl to PRETEND to be your
girlfriend and you don't even know how to treat her.
Post more soon, k?
Awh. Pft.
I love Geek, Popular Guy stories.
Even though they are cliche.
This has been really good so far, I hope
Tess backs off.
Haha. I loved this line.
""Before this, she used to be a nottie," he mumbled low enough for only me to hear. I lightly punched him in the gut."
xD Nice Shane. Get a girl to PRETEND to be your
girlfriend and you don't even know how to treat her.
Post more soon, k?
12/27/2008 c2 nolongerinterested
! i seriously cant wait!
i wanna see how mitchie looks like!
Omg!
updae soon please!
! i seriously cant wait!
i wanna see how mitchie looks like!
Omg!
updae soon please!