for A New Destiny for Those Forgotten3/23/2009 c2 
4Tigeress-Jayde
lol thats really good
i have the same problem wif people reviewin mine
great story cant wait for more
4Tigeress-Jaydelol thats really good
i have the same problem wif people reviewin mine
great story cant wait for more
11/13/2008 c2 Raptor2001
i wonder you will planning to naruto or naruto's characther ... to back up story ... you can't write OC without naruto or any naruto charachter ... ..
i usually hate OC stories ... but your writing is great and plots .. i hope you will addition with naruto no need rush plotline ..mi notice your review is two reivew as same person ... i like Hakumei ..Please dont hunt me .. i am on review ..any update ? i am will wait for it
dont worry about grammar look my grammar is lousy too..
i wonder Izumi will meet naruto in what way ?
i wonder you will planning to naruto or naruto's characther ... to back up story ... you can't write OC without naruto or any naruto charachter ... ..
i usually hate OC stories ... but your writing is great and plots .. i hope you will addition with naruto no need rush plotline ..mi notice your review is two reivew as same person ... i like Hakumei ..Please dont hunt me .. i am on review ..any update ? i am will wait for it
dont worry about grammar look my grammar is lousy too..
i wonder Izumi will meet naruto in what way ?
10/6/2008 c2 adfsfasdf
lol dont worry about it ;D. Anyway, damn this stories awesome! The characters are really cool except for Deyan. He's an ass lol. Plus your grammar and spelling is really good. I wish I was patient enough to fix my spelling and grammar. Good job and can't wait for the next chapter.
lol dont worry about it ;D. Anyway, damn this stories awesome! The characters are really cool except for Deyan. He's an ass lol. Plus your grammar and spelling is really good. I wish I was patient enough to fix my spelling and grammar. Good job and can't wait for the next chapter.
10/4/2008 c1 adfsfasdf
I like it. It definitely has a lot of potential and I can’t wait to see the next part. Keep up the good work =D.
I like it. It definitely has a lot of potential and I can’t wait to see the next part. Keep up the good work =D.