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12/9/2009 c1 41PaperAndFire13
Aww this was cute. This was the first Vampire Knight fanfiction I've read, and I'm so glad I did read it. I'm so adding this to my favourite stories.
9/24/2009 c1 9HopelessRomantic143
Wow... this story was excellent, probably the best I've read in a long time. I loved the descriptive words that you used to describe Zero too!
9/21/2009 c1 8PrettyGirlRocks
lovely absolutely lovely! i love love love your zeki stories so much and i am so glad u decided to add that final scene cause it would have been incomplete without it but it was perfect! can't wait to read the other two! i must say a feel a very small amount of pity for kaname...very small lol
9/17/2009 c1 1justanotherhumanbeing
DANG.

THIS IS AWESOMELY HOT/SEXY/SWEET/EVERYTHING IN BETWEEN THOSE LINES (jaw drops and starts drooling)

you made zero ULTRA SEXY so god bless you like hell (yes. contradiction in know). and making Yuuki not like Kaname? AWESOME. cuz i'm not a real fan of yuukixkaname. but how Yuuki is portrayed here made me like her for once: cuz she chose Zero instead of Kaname for once :D

i was like...smiling and smiling and smiling the whole time i was reading this 0_0

THANKS FOR THE AWESOME STORY AND KEEP UP THE GREATT WORK 3

ps: ZERO DOES HAVE HOT LIPS (faints)
8/18/2009 c1 3Honeybun540
i loved the story! so much better then her ending up with Kaname!
8/3/2009 c1 32Romancelover1321
Wow awesome job I'm actually jealous of Yuki. Anyway I loved it, no mistakes, no complaints and I do agree with you 100% about Zero's lips.
7/7/2009 c1 5October-Yuki
omg i love it it was amazing! i love this story!
6/25/2009 c1 GinaLovesZero
Hell yeah, Zero has nice lips! When I read VK, I'm just like *drool* He's just that sexy!

I loved this one too! I wished something like this actually happened!
6/9/2009 c1 5fetching
This was amazing! You are an awsome writer. You are extremely talented. Good job.
5/30/2009 c1 2maplethistlerose
Wow- very very very nice!
5/24/2009 c1 3seraph86
i'm absolutely PRO nice lips ;) and zero's anyway.

i loved this story! not quite lemon, but exciting anyways - this was perfect! thank you for writing
5/4/2009 c1 2iSweets
I love it! This piece is too good for words. ^^
4/28/2009 c1 240ptimuspenguin
KAWAII! OMFG I love your series :D

I wish I could write so cutely LOL
4/23/2009 c1 1jilldragomirs
You are a beautiful writer. Your vivid descriptions and speech drew me into the story. I also love the ideas you have. It makes me feel all happy inside.

But...

It sounds TOO much like Twilight. Zero said things Edward would totally say and same goes with Yuki and Bella. It tended to get annoying at times because I want to read your story not Stephenie Meyer's.

You're wonderful though, hun. So keep up the great work. Just make it completely into your own.
4/2/2009 c1 1frencht0aster
Zero does have some might fine lips. =]

And if it's even possible, your writing makes him even hotter.
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