for Another Brother8/6/2020 c1 kayyeh1
wait was iroh killed on zuko's ship? or i guess he would still be seizing Ba Sing Sei at this point...
wait was iroh killed on zuko's ship? or i guess he would still be seizing Ba Sing Sei at this point...
8/3/2020 c39 cass
woah. so i just recently found this, and oh my, it’s AMAZING. i didn’t even realize how far apart some of the edits were until you said so, the flow and connection of it all is impeccable. i know i’m one of the thousands to review this, but your characterization and plot abilities are so beautiful. i seriously hope you continue this because of how wonderfully whole it feels. your descriptions are so vivid, even fight scenes flow so well along the pages. amazing work lol. thank you so so so much.
woah. so i just recently found this, and oh my, it’s AMAZING. i didn’t even realize how far apart some of the edits were until you said so, the flow and connection of it all is impeccable. i know i’m one of the thousands to review this, but your characterization and plot abilities are so beautiful. i seriously hope you continue this because of how wonderfully whole it feels. your descriptions are so vivid, even fight scenes flow so well along the pages. amazing work lol. thank you so so so much.
8/4/2020 c39 AlfaVictor
So I read this entire thing over the span of 2 days, and let me say, it's an amazing piece of work. Everything about this is top quality, from the characters to the writing style to the twists and turns in the plot, where it diverges from canon believably but still fits within the mold. It adds to the avatar universe through the descriptions of bending, and continues to hold interest throughout the entire story. I'm really glad you decided to revive this , and I can't wait for the next installment :)
So I read this entire thing over the span of 2 days, and let me say, it's an amazing piece of work. Everything about this is top quality, from the characters to the writing style to the twists and turns in the plot, where it diverges from canon believably but still fits within the mold. It adds to the avatar universe through the descriptions of bending, and continues to hold interest throughout the entire story. I'm really glad you decided to revive this , and I can't wait for the next installment :)
8/4/2020 c35 
1Keyanna
My favorite part of this chapter, hands-down, is Mayvai using “Bless his heart” in the true Southern style about Pakku. Katara naturally misses the meaning since she doesn’t have the cultural context for the expression. So funny!
1KeyannaMy favorite part of this chapter, hands-down, is Mayvai using “Bless his heart” in the true Southern style about Pakku. Katara naturally misses the meaning since she doesn’t have the cultural context for the expression. So funny!
8/2/2020 c39 Guest
Ty lee is an air nomad descent and leaves azula when she finds out. I am here for this.
Ty lee is an air nomad descent and leaves azula when she finds out. I am here for this.
8/1/2020 c39 Mori
Hello, Mori here. I would like to know if you're still updating this? I really love it and I've been binge reading these past couple days. Hopefully you update this in the next couple days as I love it.
Hello, Mori here. I would like to know if you're still updating this? I really love it and I've been binge reading these past couple days. Hopefully you update this in the next couple days as I love it.
8/2/2020 c39 14Gracidea of the Valley
And I guess we don't get nice things...
Can't have the Gaang all together, with Zuko, Sokka, Momo...Sad...
14Gracidea of the ValleyAnd I guess we don't get nice things...
Can't have the Gaang all together, with Zuko, Sokka, Momo...Sad...
8/2/2020 c39 1Nathissica
I love this story so much, and am so ridiculously happy to have another chapter! Also WOW! Holy crap, what a goodie! poor Aang and that pesky murderous rampage, poor Zuko and his sister/Mai probs, and POOR SOKKA omg the Gaang better save him! I need my sarcasm and meat boy back! Also, I'm loving Toph's metalbending being included so effortlessly into the AU, as well as your origins for mindbending. Very cleverplease keep writing, I'll be here eagerly awaiting the next installment!
1NathissicaI love this story so much, and am so ridiculously happy to have another chapter! Also WOW! Holy crap, what a goodie! poor Aang and that pesky murderous rampage, poor Zuko and his sister/Mai probs, and POOR SOKKA omg the Gaang better save him! I need my sarcasm and meat boy back! Also, I'm loving Toph's metalbending being included so effortlessly into the AU, as well as your origins for mindbending. Very cleverplease keep writing, I'll be here eagerly awaiting the next installment!