for Darkness Falls Upon Us1/12/2023 c29 Paulsson
*10 years later*
*10 years later*
2/3/2022 c1 lianlamkhual123
Sorry but from the review and the controlling a fking curse before 11 no no, and the thing i dispise is you isolated yourself and harm other while never thinking why didn't i have friend. And having too much friend fanfic in is not good,telling every secret to your friend is not good too,And power hungry or letting hungry for something too much is not good,or lazy mc,lucky mc, and overconfident mc such as training a little and op or bron with power over merlin. These kind of fanfic is worst and too much force of your fantasy is shit.
Sorry but from the review and the controlling a fking curse before 11 no no, and the thing i dispise is you isolated yourself and harm other while never thinking why didn't i have friend. And having too much friend fanfic in is not good,telling every secret to your friend is not good too,And power hungry or letting hungry for something too much is not good,or lazy mc,lucky mc, and overconfident mc such as training a little and op or bron with power over merlin. These kind of fanfic is worst and too much force of your fantasy is shit.
9/2/2021 c10 Hsitirb
Well this is fucking pathetic, literally grasping at straws to find a random way not to put daphne with Harry, after you developed the relationship that way
Well this is fucking pathetic, literally grasping at straws to find a random way not to put daphne with Harry, after you developed the relationship that way
3/8/2021 c3 
1Speedster1014
No hate but please make sure your quote marks are where they are susposed to be it makes it semi hard to read otherwise but wonderful plot
1Speedster1014No hate but please make sure your quote marks are where they are susposed to be it makes it semi hard to read otherwise but wonderful plot
3/8/2021 c1 Speedster1014
"Waiting a minute for that to sync in fully, Quirrell then...
That should be
.” Waiting a minute for that to fully sink in, Quirrell then...
"Waiting a minute for that to sync in fully, Quirrell then...
That should be
.” Waiting a minute for that to fully sink in, Quirrell then...
12/3/2019 c10 3AlernateReality
wtf is with Daphne here? One second kissing Harry the next with Blaise?
3AlernateRealitywtf is with Daphne here? One second kissing Harry the next with Blaise?
9/19/2019 c11 2Damien NightFall
Are you fucking kidding me? Is harry seriously that damn or do you just enforce his idiocy to get the plot to the point you want It to? First tricked by a trick that could have been thought of by a 5 year old, then not fighting back against Tracey Davis, and then spilling his guts to her. It's like your trying to make a badass take-no-shit Harry Potter but keep second guessing yourself and making him a submissive spoiled brat.
2Damien NightFallAre you fucking kidding me? Is harry seriously that damn or do you just enforce his idiocy to get the plot to the point you want It to? First tricked by a trick that could have been thought of by a 5 year old, then not fighting back against Tracey Davis, and then spilling his guts to her. It's like your trying to make a badass take-no-shit Harry Potter but keep second guessing yourself and making him a submissive spoiled brat.
2/4/2019 c29 MidnightsRose
This was a fun read, I really hope you update like promised. Cant wait for more.
This was a fun read, I really hope you update like promised. Cant wait for more.
12/31/2018 c24 Padhi
Pathetic chapter asshole how can fleur feel bad for longbottoms when he knows who harry is and want him to feel bad lol harry is dark and she knows it even practocised dark curse yet u show such pathetic chapter u asshole rot in hell u bitch
Pathetic chapter asshole how can fleur feel bad for longbottoms when he knows who harry is and want him to feel bad lol harry is dark and she knows it even practocised dark curse yet u show such pathetic chapter u asshole rot in hell u bitch
12/31/2018 c12 Padhi
For someone who is powerful and Slytherin u expised potter like this Shane on u when he is powerful enoto defend that curse why would he talk to the snake Ur writing is pathetic u bastard wastes my time I hope u rott in hell
For someone who is powerful and Slytherin u expised potter like this Shane on u when he is powerful enoto defend that curse why would he talk to the snake Ur writing is pathetic u bastard wastes my time I hope u rott in hell
12/31/2018 c10 Padhi
If harry is too young so is Blaine and daphne pathetic writing why will harry sacrifice daphne and want to be a 3rd wheel in their friendship and he should be selfish hate Ur writing
If harry is too young so is Blaine and daphne pathetic writing why will harry sacrifice daphne and want to be a 3rd wheel in their friendship and he should be selfish hate Ur writing